Wow, now that's messed up (in a good way)

Keep up the good work man!

wonder why her powers are so wack right now?

Oh, I get it, these are just Raven's visions, I was a little confused there for a second.

uh oh.

Why is everything happening so quickly?

this story scared me... it was good, but kind of like something you hear around the campfire. i got chills now. definitly do more like this!

WOW! A little rough but really good! I had an idea for a story like this but never wrote it down... But hey, great minds think alike. _

Bravo. _

Uh...o...KAY! Right. I am so confused. The end was funny tho.

peace

titan009

twisted yet good. God bless the author who can finish their story on a high note.

cool story :) I liked how you kept the suspence and have the reader guessing what is going to happen next...keep up the great work.

um...i don't know what to say...it was odd but good...

OMG! Are you gonna write more of these? They are incredible! I can't wait to read more! Please dontinue! _

Okay, now reading this has got me asking lots of questions. But I am can answer them. _ Mysterious...I LIKE!

*blink blink* Oh my gosh...

This was the first thing I had in my inbox so I just HAD to read it. :) Awesome start! I am now off to read the next *counts* 3 chapters. Been busy, yes? _