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leddy 5/6/04 . chapter 1
What a great scenario to have them 'sleep' together. Enjoyed it a lot.
And Also With You 5/6/04 . chapter 1
This was a great response! I love flustered geeks. Very sweet scene in the car.
luxor 5/6/04 . chapter 1
That was nice ... sweet. I really enjoyed your glimpse into our geeks' shared moment. It is a start ... at least Grissom acknowledges his feelings for Sara to himself and I love the image of them wrapped up in each other's arms. Slow and steady. Great story and challenge response.
Battus philenor 5/6/04 . chapter 1
He thinks she's adorable and he holds her when they sleep... this was sweet. I think you should continue this one. ;)
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