well, most stories go right to the action, especially if it's a one shot, it gets to the point of whatever the hell it's trying to get across. they have to be clear on something, so right from the get go you know basically whats going to happen.

This was sort of light in that sense, despite it's graphic nature. I highly enjoyed it's difference to any of the stories i've read. you did not do that, I couldn't tell what the hell was going to happen next, though I was hoping for a pairing. This was amazingly different, the ending was slightly humorus and so let

Very nice. Really embodies the mindset of the military in this time frame and place.

:)

Dearest me - this was absolutely amazing.

I never would have thought this trope (don't want to give the game away to anyone reading reviews) would work - but it really, really does.

Startling - amazing.

wow...that really had my heart beating...I thought for sure Roy was going to die.

Great fic!

You know, this was one of those really, really awesome stories that you don't really want to keep reading, because they hurt, but you have to keep reading.

I wish I could think of a better word than "wow" but I'm at a loss.

Simply the best Roy fic I have yet had the pleasure of reading. Let no man defy your wonderful ability to bring forth a total sum of a character's parts without any moment of control.

Bravo.

...wow. O_o

wow.

*shiver*

Oh, hurray! That was wonderful! XD

Wow!

Loved it. You've managed to capture Roy's personality very well! I hope you'll write more of him. .- Thank for this. :)

My god! This is incredible.

This was fantastic. My favorite line:
Everyone knew it. Roy was the type of man who would bend physical laws over the knee of his pride, demanding that nature itself submit to his fancy.
That is SO Roy. It's such a delight to read fic where the characterization is so spot-on.