Great fic!

You know, this was one of those really, really awesome stories that you don't really want to keep reading, because they hurt, but you have to keep reading.

I wish I could think of a better word than "wow" but I'm at a loss.

Simply the best Roy fic I have yet had the pleasure of reading. Let no man defy your wonderful ability to bring forth a total sum of a character's parts without any moment of control.

Bravo.

...wow. O_o

wow.

*shiver*
Oh, hurray! That was wonderful! XD

Wow!
Loved it. You've managed to capture Roy's personality very well! I hope you'll write more of him. ^.- Thank for this. :)

My god! This is incredible.

This was fantastic. My favorite line:
Everyone knew it. Roy was the type of man who would bend physical laws over the knee of his pride, demanding that nature itself submit to his fancy.
That is SO Roy. It's such a delight to read fic where the characterization is so spot-on.