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| Sam 2008-10-11 ch 15, anon. | abuseJust finished reading this great fanfic and then went onto the authors page to see you passed away in 2006 so sad especially as you were only born the year before me and died two years ago that's terrible and shocking but most of all sad, Rest in Peace Love Sam |
| dkwr07 2008-09-25 ch 15, | abuseAwesome can't wait for more. please update soon. |
| David Fishwick 2008-03-26 ch 15, | abuseNice story and interesting concepts please update soon. |
| twilightm00n 2008-02-21 ch 15, | abuseWicked awesome. Onto the favorites it goes. |
| darkangel 2008-01-01 ch 15, anon. | abusesome one said its been about 2 years since u last up dated so i really hope u havn't gave up on this story cause it kicks **, so if u still write plz don't leave me and the other readers hanging, plz plz plz continue with this story, but as its now 2008 i dont think u r gonna write no more, so plz prove me wrong and continue with this story:) |
| sweetie 2007-12-26 ch 15, anon. | abuseyou say you are going to update, but you didnt. I hate storie's like this.. that leave people hanging.. |
| rocks and glass 2007-02-01 ch 15, | abusethis is a brilliant story. you took a good plot idea, and integrated it flawlessly with the canon. the interactions between the people from the two universes are brilliantly done, and the whole thing is very well written. you have also done a wonderful job with the plot and accompanying twists. i really want to read more. but um, it has been nearly 2 years since you have updated. is this a case of extended writer's block, or are you not going to continue the story. either way it would perhaps be a good idea to post a note with the story to tell readers. then we/i wouldn't have to wonder. i hope it is just a case of extended writers block. brilliant story either way. |
| Monic 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI'm an idiot and should look at the Author's bio more closely. I didn't know you but I mourn for you all the same, I mourn for all the lost stories you will never get to tell. *raises glass* "To absent friends, lost loves, old gods, and the season of mists; and may each and every one of us always give the devil his due." -- Hob Gadling, Seasons of Mists Neil Gaiman |
| Descena 2006-10-31 ch 15, | abuse*Cries* That's all? No update!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? *Cries some more* [Well, that's probably a bit overdramatic...] |
| Monic 2006-10-19 ch 15, | abuseReading your summary I was very skeptical with the premise but man, I really do have to eat my own skepticism because you have sucked me in like a big sucking thing. I read your whole story in one sitting and now I'm anxiously waiting for more. You made the entire thing believable because of how you write the characters. Its very true to who they are. You did justice to everyone. I love it. What I love even more is that this is a well-written B/A and that tickles me far more than anything. Will Buffy of that reality come to play anytime soon? I mean, She's a pretty big player in that reality its hard to think she won't come to play in any prophecy regarding the Three. And like most prophecies I too am also skeptical with it. Thank you for writing this and I'll be eagerly waiting for more. |
| zerogravityboy1 2006-06-07 ch 15, | abusegreat story |
| - J 2006-02-15 ch 15, anon. | abuseWhat happened here? I've enjoyed this story a lot (sorry, I only started reviewing recently), especially the notion of Cordy's bad wish. So understandable yet so tragic. I love their friendship. Interesting draggin Anyanka into it, too! |
| Serrafina 2005-12-16 ch 15, | abuseWell, I just finished this story and--this may be pointless but I've gotta say it--GET OVER YOUR WRITER'S BLOCK! PLEASE! This story is amazing. You are a great writer. Everyone is perfectly in character, and the plot is very well done. You clearly have/had plans for this story, but if all your ideas have dried up I would suggest sitting down with a pen and paper and just thinking about the where you want to go from here, what the characters are likely to do next, etc. That usually works for me. |
| Serrafina 2005-12-15 ch 9, | abuseYou have no idea how much I love you for that ending-a-sentence-in-a-preposition line. The rest of the chapter was great too, but the preposition thing holds special significance. |
| Serrafina 2005-12-14 ch 2, | abuseHey, I just started reading this story and I love it so far. The writing is great; I can't believe English isn't your first language! However, I did notice a couple things: 1) In the first scene of this chapter, you said "swaggering" when you meant "staggering" 2) I think you have repeatedly said "feint" when you mean "faint". |