whoa. short but great rhythm to it. so true Fingolfin! rail at Feanaro! make him see the light.. pity, no one, not even Nerdanel could.

You know what? That's short, but it's great!
I love the old-style speech, what I wouldn't give to see a re-enactment of the major parts of the Silmarillion on stage. Your writing put me in mind of that.

hmm. short but pretty funky...