HA! I really loved Malcolm's internal monologue in this fic! Really funny! Thanks for posting this!

I liked the story. Yay, Malcolm and Hoshi. I found it a little hard to follow, though. Liked Malcolm comparing Emma Something to Hoshi.

Perfect use of the Daniel Bedingfield song (now I am going to have that stuck in my head for a while :) ). Very swet and well carried out.

Very nice work in that you conveyed actions and thoughts rather than dialogue. It really created an intimate atmosphere between Malcolm and the reader.
And you made me like movie night.
And I think he did say Did you miss me out loud.
And I think Hoshi leaned in to say I certainly did.
Thanks for no angst, I was in the mood for a positive ending.

Wo! For somebody who says they aren't romantic that was a birlliant lil story!
Mind you if Malcolm's calling her Emma Something-Or-Other they have have to return to the basics and have the Relationship Talk e.g
"Well we've been going out for about blah blah now and I think it's time we moved onto the bigger picture-your surname for instance would be a great start!"
lol, anyhoo twas great!
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There’s this moronic smile on my face and it’s entirely your fault. ;)
I like this – nice job there, although I’d really love to know what Malcolm said to Hoshi, and vice versa. There is going to be (at least) a second part... right? Right? Don’t make me camp outside your house now...