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Garnetcorvid 2008-07-08 ch 1,	abuseHonestly this makes me very sad...very hot mind you, but still sad. Having such strong feelings and physical reactions to just the thought of someone is bad enough...but the fact that she's dead? It kinda amplifies it, makes it hurt a little more i felt. Very descriptive and nicely done. It flows well...good stuff...
Sweet Scrifice 2008-06-01 ch 1,	abuseIt's really hard to find any RiddickxCarolyn stories, and I have to say this small piece was great! I really loved how you describe how much had Riddick wanted Carolyn. It was amazing! I really like it! Thanx for writing such an excellent piece ^^
Furyan Goddess 2007-02-22 ch 1,	abuseI like this... very primitive.
Shaunny 2006-12-04 ch 1,	abusegr8 job. detail, and totally riddick. loved it. omgeezy. haha
PitchBlackLover 2005-02-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice i have not come across sameone that was able to voie Riddick so well!CLAP CLAP TO-DO-LO! BYE, PitchBlackLover
The Spiny Butterfly 2005-02-05 ch 1,	abuseGood.
Aikou 2004-12-27 ch 1,	abuseFirst off. Damn. Not that I was more surprised than you were probably were yourself when you wrote this, however I did have a few eyebrow raisers there. There are not many fictions out there that get inside Riddick's head (or POV) .. at least not do it well, and as you did, make it believable. And this is why you deserve major, major props. Despite its deepness, it vulgarity and explicitness, it was honest. Honest in the eyes of Riddick, anyhow. Now, I can't exactly imagine that he was really hard in his pants just because he was near Carolyn on that ship, BUT hey, we weren't zoomed in on his crotch, so it's possible. ;) Although these kind of fics are even a little more racy for my taste (at least when I try to take fics seriously), I enjoyed it. I really did. I loved how Riddick described Carolyn as a timid rabbit. And yes, it does make sense for him to have this wet dream because he has been in jail too long... So once again, I commend you for 'nailing the voice.' And I apologize, but I'm curious.. Is Curiouser even a word? Or is it a grammatical error purposely placed by Riddick because he's a bad ** and can make up any word he wants? =P Lol.
Jess J 2004-09-23 ch 1,	abuseAnd finally, I can review this! hugs computer that lets her review This fic is is amazing. It's dead on, it's dark, it's depressing, it's Riddick, it's glimpsing of what could have been, it's just amazing. You definitely got Riddick's voice right, too right. ~_^ I love it.
jambery 2004-08-17 ch 1,	abuseThis was pretty good. You managed to capture Riddick's voice very well - the slang he uses and the cadence of the words all rang true to me. One thing: you say "allude my senses" and it should be "elude my senses". I don't think it was vulgar at all. It's just the way he is. Nice job.
Methaya 2004-08-16 ch 1,	abuseThis was a wonderful story. Short, bittersweet and heartbreaking. You made Riddick express his inner workings in a very believable way. You didn't fall in to the trap of making him a nicer guy than he is. He is a killer, as near a monster as possible and his thoughts on Fry portray that beautifully. On the one hand you made me wish that it only had worked out between them, on the other hand you leave it open whether he is changed man or not. The last words seem to indicate that he is. You made me think a great deal, always a very very good thing with short stories. Thank you for sharing this.
TheCapillary 2004-07-13 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. The way you got into Riddick's head was just awesome.
Arabell 2004-06-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat ficcy! I loved it. The movie is soo very sad though. I wish Fry wouldnt have died. tear
Spider-bear 2004-06-16 ch 1,	abusevery good..you really captured the personality of riddick...no question that he is exactly like that! well done! some nasty visuals but oh well! thats riddick for ya! haha!
Midnight Squeaks 2004-06-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseAwesome fic. I only read fics that have Fry/Riddick pairings. I guess i'm corrupted that way. Really a pain half the time. I think you should write more. I love the way you portraited Riddick. You really got the voice down. I could picture it in my mind... keep writing!
blackthistle 2004-06-08 ch 1, anon.	abusebeen coming to the website for a while and I must say that of all the Riddick/Pitch Black stories I have read this one really nailed riddick to a tee..how he would of thought and put things togther..job well done..I realy dont have anything negitive to say...look foward to reading more..

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