This is outstanding! You are an extremely talented writer.

This is beautiful. But beautiful is such an overused word, it's lost its meaning over time so I search for other adjectives to describe this prose. Subtley intriguiging- gentle; you show a mastery of words and the art of assimilating ideas to create something so delicately wonderful, I smile, even though no one is here to see me.

Beautiful.

So, so forboding and dark and - oh!

My God, you make my OT3 look beautiful and hinted and just so amazing; the style is beautiful and dark and amazing and I adore the plot and how it just twist and twirls around fingers. Lovely, lovely!

:D

You ARE updating this, right?

- Pixie

Oh I like it, though the way you wrote 'InuYasha/Kagome/Kikyo' was mileading, I think you meant 'Kagome/Inuyasha/Kikyo' to imply to regular love triangle *sighs sadly*

I like the style of writing you have, and this is a first were I have heard someone actually put Asuka and Kocho in. ^.^ Very original... for fanfiction that is.

sound evil. *grin* is she gona kill inu? good way to put the story tho. i love how you put word into sentences and make it visul. great story!

I can't believe this didn't get more reviews. It's very interesting (I am a Kikyo fan myself) and I hope that you continue.

*whistles* WAHOO! Wonderful! Glorious! Absolutely spectacular! And don't you dare think I'm just saying that. I'm personally hugely apposed to the whole "personal pronouns" way of telling stories...but...DAMN. And I mean DAMN. You blew my mind with that. The writing's sensational and you've got obvious talent for get wedged right in there with Kikyo's rock-in-a-heart place. I love it! (And now despise InuYasha, but that isn't the point) 5 stars plus 10! Everyone should read this!

There's nothing I love more than finding a well-written fanfiction at 3:00 in the morning! =D
And I mean it. At night, written words paint images that seem to dance in the dark; Kikyo's fixation with blood tinted my own vision red, and I could clearly imagine her drifting through the forest like a ghost.
The style of writing in this piece is beautiful; so many wonderful images come to mind, and you still capture Kikyo's personality. This doesn't seem so much like a fanfic as it does a journal of her thoughts.
^_^ Regards. You're a very talented author.