Unusual look at Albus Dumbledore. Is this a letter that the former supreme mugwump Wrote when Dumbledore took his place at the head of the council, or am I just completely missing the point? Anyway, this was a pretty good fic, I can't see why you don't like it.

that was so good! i cant believe you dont like it very much; i thought it was supremely interesting, especially albus as a kid

ok not very easy to follow. if u could clean it up some and i didn't really get what it was about. u did a real good job but just kinda clean it up and it will be really good.

This isn't bad! I thought it was about Draco until you brought up the hair color. I've never seen a fic about Dumbledore like this. Great job.
P.S. I know how you feel, feeling isolated from the world and all. We're both insane:)

I really like it. I dont think it needs to be continued or else it would draw it out way too much. I think its great the way it is, with an unanswered and a bit humorous flair to it. good job. and its ok to scream in you pillow. ]

This story has potential but you kind of miss out the important detail, like who and where the hell the story is getting at, may be if write a second chapter things might become clear.