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| Mirwen Sunrider 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abusePoor darling. *gives Faramir a hug* Well, the truth will out... and now healing may come. |
| TangerineBreeze 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseVery good! My eyes are all watery now... you had some very deep and profound thoughts in there, some points that I had not consider. Both of the characters seemed very in-character, you did wonderfully. Keep on writing! ...oh, and this is so totally nitpicking, but the phrase 'Why I?' bothers me and isn't grammatically correct. But other than that, splendid! |
| boromir 2004-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story. |
| Dimfuin 2004-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good. I think it's my favorite of all Faramir telling-the-truth stories;-) Good job! |
| Neige 2004-05-08 ch 1, | abuseYou portrayed both characters very well, especially Gandalf. Thank you for writing this!! Neige |
| Voice of Insanity 2004-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI found this very touching. This was very well-written and you describe Faramir's grief very well. Keep up the good work! |
| Rosie26 2004-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery realistic and in keeping with Tolkien. Excellent. |