well you wrote angst alright. sorry gotta go! hope you write more

This story is the ISH!
she died...so grimey, but so deep OMGG

Ohh wow. I cried. my heart hurts now.

Way to go.
This was amazing though. The way you wrote it.
Everything.
Poor Kagome.

-Samantha

Beautiful and sad. I guess you can call it a beautiful disaster! Nice job!

This is amazing! I loved this story - and I can't wait to read anything else you might write!

I CAN'T BELIEVE HIM HOW COULD HE DO THAT TO HER, AFTER ALL THAT THEY WENT THROUGH, JUST FOR THE**IN CLAY POT THAT STILL WALKS THE EARTH.
anyway now that my angers died awy a bit the was very angsty, and it was so sad, u should continue a bit more with it and make Inuyasha relised how depressed his goona be.
Don't get me wrong I love Inuyasha and all but I hate it when things like that happen.
Kepp up the good work. :)
P.

u should definitly write another chapter. i like ones where inuyasha turns on kagome then relializes his mistake. kudos

Very angst. It's a good story and I want you to write more!!

BASTERD!GOW DARE HE!GR...DONT TAKE THAT THE WRONG WAY I LOVED IT BUT I AM EMOTIONAL SO PLEASEDONT TAKE IT PERSONALLY!YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!...NOW PLEASE LET ME VENT I AM YELLING AT INUYASHA AND NOT YOU IF THAT MAKES ANY SENSE...*starts screaming*HOW DARE HE!SHE WAS NOTHING BUT HIS MOST TRUSTED AND LOYAL FRIEND AND HE KILLED HER FOR SOME DEAD WALKING CLAY CORPSE!GR!THAT IS UNFORGIVABLE!AND KAGOME THE KIND HEARTED PERSON SHE IS FORGAVE HIM LIKE IT WAS NOTHING!ANYWAY THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME VENT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORG AND YOU MUST WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!UPDATE!

Oh my god! You almost had me in tears! My eyes are watering right now! Oh I hate how good of writer you are! LOL Well, I'ma go get a tissue now! Buh byez ~CrimsonShadows~

that was an amazing one-shot you should have inuyasha try to bring kagome back to life in a second or even third chapter. Kikyo needs to die in any case.

aw. that was so sad >

it's definitely a good story/chapter thing so adding another chapter is a really good idea i think

this one is cute, the first is not. They are both, however, quite good, and entertaining, and I can't wait for the next installment.

The first story was so sad. I almost cried. You made Inuyasha kill Kagome, but it is a change from all those other stories. I like it. I hate tragedy stories, but I still read them. Ironic...
Anyways, i can't wait until you post another story.