This story is amazing and you have an amazing talent. X

I really enjoyed this fic! I am so glad that Gil & Sara are finally on the same page. I just wish it hadn't taken this to bring them together! I know that you write this years ago, but boy would I love a sequel! (Or at least an epilogue!)

Thanks for pointing me to this fic...I am hooked already!

Hi! I just wanted to say how much I loved this story. I read it a while ago, but it is truly THE BEST CSI fanfiction drama/romance I have ever reaad. It is definitely my favorite, and thank you for writing such an amazing story!

hey, i read this story a while ago, but i don't think i ever let you know how amazing it is. it really touches on a lot of important issues between grissom and sara and your writing and portrayal of sara's trauma was terrific =)

Bravo!1
I need a spectacular ending if you please mystro!
My heart muscle is stuck! Mindy M.

This story ROCKS!

i love reading books and this is by far one of the best stories i have ever read, well done
i loved everything about it and it made me imagine the things i was reading in my head as i was reading it which is what a good novel is supposed to do. congratulations on a job well done x

Hey i loved it the whole of it! You have talent, a huge talent. Write on! lol. Only one thing though, grissom nick and warrick called sara pet-names like honey a bit to often. that doesn't really capture the way grissom was distant from her. but i loved it nonetheless.

umm, excuse me?

to follow up this story i have a story of my own.
here it goes...
ok.
i saw the story.
i clicked the story.
i read the story.
THE STORY KICKED TOTAL **.

omg, it was so awesome ! i forgot i wasnt reading an actual transcript, thats how awesome it is. omg. i am a total total total gsr fan, which made me love the story by default, but it was so excellently written, i was freakin AMAZED.

omfg.


I LOVE IT !

Okay I'm kind of hesitant to offer these critisms because I find your writting quite charming, but I don't really get why they'd need to investigate Lorie's house when they caught him there with her and she can confirm who did it.
Also the boys seem a bit over done...you use the word "emotional" an aweful lot and I don't know why I noticed, besides the fact that it's 2 am.
I really like it otherwise however and am more than willing to overlook the small inperfections for the whole of the story, which is fantastic.
Thanks for listening (reading) my ramblings.
Yuki

Beautiful story!

^_^ i absolutly love this story. you are god.
I just think they might have been a little bit OOC with all the declarations of love, but then again i only started watching CSI a month ago and dont know too much about the characters.
I cant wait to read more of your stories!! ^_^

I really loved this story, will have to read the rest of your CSI fics :)

That's the end of it? Bummer. Great job though. Lots of fun to read.