ooh! ooh! update! update! can't wait! it gets me everytime i read something new like this. ESPECIALLY ones with good grammar n an exciting plot! hurry, continue, ok?

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I like it.. _ It was very well written, and you can describe the events and settings so well. o Keep up the good work, I'll be reading the future chaps. _

Keep it up! And update soon though!