 little-miss-evilness 5/19/07 . chapter 5AwZuMneSS luv lme |
 FireFairy032003 8/29/04 . chapter 5thats so mean i liked this story why wont you add more? first you take forever to update, than when you finally do you end the story, i hope you feel bad about making your readers pissed off. |
 Pic-a-boo-I-C-U 7/13/04 . chapter 1I read to chap 4 but ill write here i like both this and the first part woa i need to sleep on this cool story love it good job |
 A cRaZy FiSh NaMeD kArU 6/12/04 . chapter 1cool |
 beforethestorm.88 6/9/04 . chapter 4yay! a new update!
keep writing |
 A cRaZy FiSh NaMeD kArU 6/3/04 . chapter 3please hurry up and write more please cause i really wont to read it come on by the way it is awsome story |
 sweetsoliloquise 5/17/04 . chapter 1 ooh, sorry. i meant the second generation of charmed ones. not charmed children. stupid. ) |
 sweetsoliloquise 5/17/04 . chapter 3 i havent read charmed children but this made me want to read it. nice job so far. keep writing! |
 HallowH8 5/15/04 . chapter 3What are they gonna do now? |
 Winter Blaze 5/15/04 . chapter 3 i think i know what happens she realizes what leo never got to finish and anyways please writer more soon i would like to see what happens next |
 icecreamandwaffles 5/14/04 . chapter 3what r u talking about? writers block my foot that was great! write more please! tanx |
 beforethestorm.88 5/14/04 . chapter 3great story!
keep writing |