|Reviews for Juilen:Demon of annoyance|
| roge temple 5/28/04 . chapter 1
a few grammer mistakes(i think...) but nice story line ...
| Warrior of Galen Eryn 5/14/04 . chapter 1
hey! this is a noce story, and it's very funny, but i'd appreciate it of you take better care of your spelling. Its 'enough', not 'enogh', and its
'Julian' not 'Julien', and its 'Rudolf' not 'Rodolf. there are many, many other spelling mistakes on your story.
your content is good but you seem to have a few holes. like for example, if Louis and Rudolf were so afraid of Julan, how come Firen has the audacity to call him 'pineapple head?"
Dont worry, these mistakes can be improved and if you continue to try, you will soon become a good writer. After all, you have a good storyline.