short, but funny and just so llike them :)

Mm, Kenshin. I'd tap that. HAHAHA! This was sweet, though a bit dark. Awesome

Not the sane reaction to a confession like that, Kaoru.

Nitpicks: You have some words and phrases mixed up. Their, not there. Were, not where. Quiet, not quite. He spat, not his spit. Too, not to.

I love your Kenshin! He's so hot. :D

I read this before and never told you how cute it was. So now I am. So cute!

love the story

Very good and different one-shot! Good work!

Delicious. A possessive Kenshin is always worth reading. M, Kaoru is one lucky girl.

he plays for keeps...yes he does great story! but thats what one can expect from you!

Very cute, well written. Loved it. :D

Oh woot- I love it XD As all your stories of course X3

Ari chan

i liked the story especially how possessive and sweet kenshin is. But there r a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that spoiled it for me. im a bit of a pedant and it always annoys me wen there r mistakes cuz it forces me to pull myself out of the story to work out wat the author's trying to say. anyway aside from that, ace story :)

cute

wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...

Short, but interesting. Nice work. Though I think Kaoru would have needed more time to think through the assassin thing.