I LOVE cheesecake! XD So not to the point _

This is so cute! I loved it and I think this is VERY well written!

I DID notice some errors however _

I have an eye for mistakes XD

You used "there" instead of "their"

And when you said "uh-huh" you missed the last "h" so it came out "uh-hu"

Just wanted to point that out XD

Great job!

You should write more it seams like a waste of such a grand piece of work seem so unfinished

*giggles at the ending* that was so cute! I loved it. _x

Quite delightful, but I noticed that in two of your one-shots that KK get together because someone attacks Kaoru. Is assault neccessary to show possesion?

I'm starting to get unhealthily addicted to your work. I would also like to point out, whether you have been told this yet or not, I'm not sure, that most of your "there"s should have been "their". Hope to see more fics from you soon.

Overall it's sweet, even though Kenshin is kind of creepy in his stalker-ing ways.

Another fantastic story!

I love this one shot! Write more like it soon!

... Uf This fic made me blush so many time ja ja bu i love it . Wow u are a very good writer hope u do contnie very soon,The best of luck. Love how kenshi is in this fic

I have just one thing to say: hot damn. Holy hot damn. this rocks! so steamy, sexy, full of romance.. Miya!

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you just gotta say it twice! its soo waffy with its wonderful fluffiness...

love it!

i like i like i like. i lovwe you work. well hope you finish you r other story's soon.

plz update soon love this is good

i loved it... it was good..

This sounds really really good. Please continue soon. _