Pretty good. Though I have to admit, the whole time, I was thinking something like this...

Me: NARUTO THAT IDIOT! (mimicking his voice) "Wow, Thanks. What's the occasion?" WHAT'S THE OCCASTION!?! BAKA! WELL GUESS WHAT STUPID? WHEN A GIRL GIVES YOU CHOCOLATE, IT MEANS THEY LIKE YOU! THAT'S THE OCCASION! HOW COULD HE ASK SOMETHING AS DUMB AS THAT! WHY I OUTGHA GET THAT GUY AND (finally really loses it) ROAR!

Honestly, that was what I was thinking throughout the whole story. -.- Naruto is so naive. T.T Poor Hinata, the only way for Naruto to know that she likes him is by telling him the words "I love you" and asking him to go out with her on a date! -.- That idiot, he needs to get his head checked!

Sorry about my reaction. But I sort of get like that when it comes to Naruto and Hinata. Why did I have to be emotional! You see, NarutoXHinata is the pairing that I am hopeing for the MOST to happen in the story and the more time it takes for Hinata and Naruto to become a couple, the more impatient I get. HEY! They're my favorite couple ok! T.T I just hope that the writer makes sure to make them a couple sooner or later! He better! Or my heart will be badly crushed! Though, I am begining to fear my BIGGEST nightmare of NarutoXSakura! If that happends, I don't really know if I'll be able to read the story anymore!

Anyway, like I said, GREAT STORY! :D At least it had a happy ending. >.< GO HINATA! GO GET HIM! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!

Poor little Hinata, she tries so hard. Luckily, Naruto is just to nice to her. :>

That's really sweet in a nice kind of way. Just goes to show how much Naruto cares about her. PLEASE tell me that it isn't a one-shot.

That was such a sweet fic.
Hinata was so cute whhen she was giving Naruto the chocolates she had made him!
I hope that you will have a great day!

Very sweet. I can see Naruto doing this. As crude as he behaves, he's actually quite a gentleman. Well done.

AHH!! I LOVE IT! SUPER CUTE! You stayed true to the characters and have, by far, perfected the natures of Naruto and Hinata! OMG I LOVED IT!

was ok story i guess lol

really nice and cute. They were in character, which is a big deal. Good job.

Danny

Finally...

FINALLY, someone writes a Naruto-Hinata that has both of them In-character and in a cute situation that would fit the plot...

Go, you! @_@

aw that was really cute.. i think that what naruto did was really sweet! i guess he's not such an idiot aftera ll huh?

that was cute!

Very nice one-shot. :)

XD Yes, the plot really does fit well with these two. ^-^

Oh . . . *Sighs dreamily* Naruto so sweet! Hey, this was really good, it left me smiling and feeling really happy! Great Job!

aw!i really like it..naruto ate it all..UPDATE SOON^^