| Reviews for Smoke |
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Aevylonya 11/25/08 . chapter 3I'm guessing this is a completely abandoned story, but I just wanted to write a review all the same, to tell you that it has peaked my interest (this doesn't happen very often). Your writing is good, albeit with some errors - you could, perhaps, profit from having a good beta-reader, and your chapters are very short, but still, the story is interesting, and I like how you've written it from Ron's p.o.v. If you should ever feel like continuing, let me know! |
Luvs2read 7/27/07 . chapter 3 please continue! and please-be gentle when you come to harry... im not sure if i'll be able to handle it if he's a pyscho [ |
Dreamer22 6/24/05 . chapter 3So I know that this is a WIP, but it was all posted on the same day and hasn't been updated since, and having just read it now, I am quite fond of it and do hope you update it in the near future. As I so formally stated, this is very well written and I quite enjoyed it! Update soon! |
Lucia Gilgalad 6/8/04 . chapter 3this story is incredible! keep it coming! |
Boom-Rhapsody 5/28/04 . chapter 3Um... HELLO? Where are you? Sit your butt down in front of the computer and continue! stupid cliffhanger, i wish to know what happens! hurry, before i lose it! j/k, but seriously, continue! |
Kim 5/18/04 . chapter 3 You are the reason at the moment I am still looking into fanfiction. Please hurry this is a good story. |
Potterfan8807 5/12/04 . chapter 3 Please do pcik up i think the story is pretty good...i like it. |
quiet 5/9/04 . chapter 3 really looking forward to your next chapter, i'm intrigued as to what is going to happen next |