Please update soon.

MAGNIFICENT! I LOVE IT TIMES INFINITY! Wonder who that new girl is, though? Loved Kamiya and crew, though ^^ Battle was tight! Update again real soon!

So this is going from the Manga, right?

Greetings, Saint X here.

I've come to give comments and suggestions and some thoughts regarding your work.

Song: "Ash Like Snow" - The Brilliant Green

Comments:

It has a good flow of events and new trend of allies/enemies so far.
- Though some ideas I see here i have already thought and were ready for implementation- oh well, this is what hiatus does to people.

No bad comments so far.
- Yet.

Suggestions:

Well I cannot think of any as of the moment, since I'm currently involved in another Universe.
- If you have MSN/Live maybe I can give some ideas...
- Don't you even dare think of "Thrones" and "Celestial Being"... or else there may be intervention... *runs*

Thoughts:

None concrete thoughts so far.
- "We are the Celestial Being, and our goal is to eradicate- *staic*" demn GN particles...

Until the next review.

Yow, poor Misakichi :( "sigh" Well, it's not a total loss, I'm sure she can still get her exercise with Hikaru down pat ^^ And the others will also be fighting, right? I will admit, I am just a bit nervous about future DG battles; just...please don't show any body parts being ripped off, I got enough of that in The Archangel Project "shivers" And yeah, DG just might pull some gunk off at the festival, but I'm sure everyone will keep an eye out; just walk away and ignore. And...something tells me that guy in that photograph might just have something to do with it all...

Ooh, a nice long chapter. And oho, I see that the international angels are coming into play...keep it up!

I'm not to good at this...

Chiaki strikes me as odd with the way she keeps popping up... The missing claw from DeathPincer that was palmed/collected by which side I'm not sure..

I was kind of was hoping for a better descrip of the Kuroshi, or at least a vague outline of them. You know like the shadowy outlines that gives you some idea of what they might look like.

I don't believe what I just read. The "Demon's Game"...an organization no Angel can stand against. But, can Hikaru somehow survive the "Demon's Game"?

YAY, HIKARU WON! Did you know that Deathpincer looks a lot like one of the Krabes from Code: Lyoko plus the pincers? Hm, Demon's Game...totally polar opposite of Angelic Layer, I don't like it "pouts" But it's still very clever ^^; Kuroshi, eh? Black Four, interesting. Well, Misaki and Hikaru have allies in the Layer, there's no way that they'll lose! ^_^ I have faith and so should everyone, make DG eat their words!! XD Update again real soon! ^__^

Interesting turn of events.

I wonder if perhaps Misaki's mom was called away because of DG, and their actions as of late. It seems like something that Icchan would take seriously.

I'm surprised he hasn't popped up yet to offer words of advice to the newcomers who are now tagging along with Misaki and the rest.

It looks lie Misaki has a new challenge to overcome, and the cost of failure is going to be extremely high. Win or lose, I don't expect Hikaru to come out perfectly fine like she has in the past.

Interesting! I look forward to seeing how the international angels will tie into this story...

...is it just me, or does DG kinda remind me of the Pokemon bad guys? XD They're quite the group of cosplayers, aren't they?

Keep it up! I look forward to reading the rest--and please read my fic "Vagabond Angel" as well!

I'm glad that you decided to update your fic again, I really enjoyed it when you first had it posted ^^ I just know that Hikaru can win, she's the star isn't she...and Misaki ^^ I have a feeling that that skull and the tumbleweeds can help her in her battle...and I also have this eerie feeling that 'Deathpincer' ain't no HUMAN Angel, am I right? Just doesn't sound like it... But, PLEASE don't destroy Hikaru, it wouldn't be very fair and besides, I want her to toast this jerk! How dare he call other Angels and their Deus' names just because he's stronger, just who does he think he is? "huffs" But anyway, I hope that you update again real soon, because I just can't wait for more ^_^

Interesting read--it reminds me of Saint X's "Kido Senshi Angelic Layer" with all the mecha madness going on. XD

Even though I have to agree with Sai there (Mech=Godmode hax!) your attention to detail in the fights is really good. It'll be interesting to see the international deii--especially since the fic I'm working on features a deus from Hawaii (of all places).

Good work so far--keep it up!

Now things get interesting!
Tora and Basho are fighting to become Misaki's disciple! Who will win this Angelic Fight?!
Meanwhile, DG (whatever that stands for) is hatching an evil plan to put the Miracle Deus out of commission. Will they succeed?
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I'll find out as soon as you update!!

eliminated? that is unexceptable!