Hihi, cute :)

AWW XD lol nice oneshot,

it's one of those hinata x naruto stories that really captures their personalities and it's just a cool breeze to read through this(:

Glad you could do that because hell, it's hard to capture that.

Love the funny story && thanx for making my day:)

youngwriter123

The domestic dog vs. the wild fox. The fox will win since the dog's jealousy will cloud his mind. Poor little Hinata. :

what...the hell. What kind of an ending was that. I was happy, imagining an ending that involved a wet Hinata and a wet Naruto, pressed against each other in a passionate embrace, all punishments forgotten. But, I suppose that not all dreams come to life. Still though, it's a well-written piece.

aww how sweet.

Aww.. This is sweet and very realistic- in the NarutoUniverse.

Is Ame a form of Love? Like Amor in Spanish? Or am I totally off on that?

aw! that was so cute!

it was really funny!

That was great! This story's really good, hope you can continue!

-jnlee

I really liked that. You're a great writer! I'm still struggling to catch up with people like you. I'm only on my third story and I thought that was an accomplishment but you've done over one-hundred. Excellent job, I envy you,haha! :D

Yup,yup, its me again, the obsesive fan of your work to congrats you for another wonderful fic!

drenched in the rain... nice plot...

heh heh heh heh. this is funny. i like this story a lot. good job.

lol that was such a cute narhina moment. hope u do more writing. nott for this story i mean writing other fics. ;D

Hahaha... so funny and yet so cute! Keep up the goo work (and please make more naruto stories)

Ah... I think NaruHina is my fave pairing. On the other hand... As long as Hinata is in a fic and isn't OOC I like the fic.