Nice!

Loved it. Would be nice to have more.

I loved your story, really good flow, hope you write another one soon :)

Good stuff! Well thought out and can be considered a professional battletech novel, unlike the others who put in aliens, gundams and super heros. Hope you continue!

Bwahahahaha, that IS a good end laddie! How to deceive the deceiver so to speak. I applaud to to you on another great story.

Guarding Cheops and rummaging through several exams and job offers,

The Sphinx

sad ending.. :!

Super well written story.

I wonder what will happan next?

This is truely... hmm whats that word... oh yes Masterful, but try not to kill off everybody. Write the next one soon. :)

GREAT CHAPTER! This chapter show that Natasha is 100% human.

short, but gut renching dude.

W00T! Damn, this is gut-wrenching stuff. I waz actually hoping a few of them would make it. I cant wait what kind of trick ending this is gonna shape up to be!

GREAT CHAPTER!Nice ending to the chapter!

Brilliant chapter, as usual but I agree with the other reviewers here: you kill your characters by the boatload. Its tough to us readers when someone we start to like dies!

well, it seems that this story, at least here, is about to end. it was a good ride, and I hope you find new ideas and don't give you keyboard too much of a break!
and if you manage to trow in some sorta twist in the end here, so long as you don't actully kill too many of the main chariters, that would be great. would be cool if the new guy got to be a hero

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I love Mechs battles.

sorry I'm too tired to give a very useful reveiw, just know that I am in this state du to reading your story for so long
well, as a bit of a understatment, your doing pretty good