oh, god just the thought of remus and harr holding each other screaming like little girls is so funny! haha! this is really good.

loveit. get rid of ron

aw that was so cute.

i started laughing when i found out ron was killed. it's so convenient. if she can't choose, get rid of the competition by random luck. i love sirius, but it was a little sudden to just murder ron... i was waiting for ron to come back and have this big confrontation...

oh well / it's your story

Wow! Love this fanfiction. But you know what? I have an idea. You can totally ignore it if you like. I think it would have been cute if in the very very very end was like, "SIRIUS ORION BLACK! That book wasn't marked!"

But maybe that a tad too fluffy.

A cute little story! It was really well written. But you switched from past-tense to present-tense pretty often, and I don't just mean the flashbacks.

But it's really good. Bravo!

If Sirius died in Harry's 5th year, when the kids were 15, and this story takes place 2 years after the graduate, when the kids are 20, how is it possible for Hermione to have walked out on Sirius 27 years ago?

Haha that's really weird that you said "Uh oh" on Chapter 7 because that is exactly what I said before I even read your Author's Note! Haha I'm loving this story!

REALLY LONG STORY!

IT WAS GOOD THOU, SAD THT RON DIED

I WOULDVE LUVED 2 HAV KNOWN MORE ABOUT THEIR SON

It's a little confusing, but still enjoyable. Although there'd be no way that McGonagle and Dumbledore wouldnt have let Hermione go back in time, because her NOT going would disrupt the timeline, because if she hadnt gone, then they wouldnt remember her being there...anywho, time travel is a tricky thing. :-)

Also, SPEW would make sense, because its not that Hermione didnt believe in having servants, she just didnt believe in having slaves. She was working to get the house elves freedom and payment. I'm assuming here that the Grangers pay their maids. :-)

lol!

Another great chapter.

Very good. :)

I just finished your story and I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading it! I actually cried when she dreamt about her sister and ron coming back and giving her, her memories back. anyways I hope you write lots of other stories too, because I really love your writing, your very gifted :) Great ending!

that was a great chapter to finish off a wonderful story! i dont remember if i reviewed or not. i apologize if i didnt. this was an auwsome story! start another son!