You're characters are shit. They are mean, and you're making all the South Park characters come across as mean as well. I mean, seriously?

So you've made Kyle into a homophobe? ... not cool.

Ughhh ... I hate Denise. I really, really do. I want to kill her with fire. She's a twat.

oh my gosh this story is so awesome! Bebe should be in it more!

Hey...I just read your story. It's awesome! I love how you incorporate a lot of the season 8 episodes into your story ( , Butters with the shoe, etc.). I really loved your story and I hope you keep up the kick-ass work. Oh yeah. It's cool how you like Cartman alot. Cartman is so sexy. :-)

Haha! Good chapter! I like Cartman/Carman parts, they make such a cute couple :) And more Lenny and Kyle, they're hilarious :P Can't wait for the next chapter, it sounds really amusing :)

LOL! Funny chapter! Fran scares me... I wonder what she'll do next... Well anyways, Lenny and Kyle were really funny too and I can't wait to see what Carman and Cartman were doing at his house! Update soon :)

No that it totally not true! Kenny does come back...so don't worry, but I won't give anything away about the series! Thanks for reading.

It was okay, but let me get this straight. You're going to have almost 30 chapters of this story, and you kill Kenny off in chapter 4? Does that mean he's not going to be in the story anymore?

Well so far I have planned for 29 chapters of the "West Park" Story so of course there will be a chapter 5! How did you all like chapter 4?

Sorry, my computer is being an ass and won't let me review for chapter 4. It was a nice chapter with a nice ending, but is that the end? Or will there be a chapter 5?

Hey there! Well your story is good, though it'd be better in script, but I've read on your Bio that you don't do script, so nevermind me! Anways, it's a good story, but it gets a little confusing when the girls are all at the same place and I sort of get mixed up on who likes who, who acts like what, and so on. Oh yes, I liked the Butters ice skating incident, poor Butters :( Well, good luck for chapter 4, can't wait to see what happens at the funeral. :)

Yea it is good, but I agree with Loogie.

Hi there! Your story was pretty good, but I agree with Loogie that it should be in script format because it's just a bit hard to read, but other than that nice job, can't wait till chapter 2!

That was pretty cool, except it'd be better in script format.