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WolfDaughter
2008-07-17
ch 19, anon.
abuseWow, somehow I managed to miss a couple of updates. Both 18 and 19 were excellent chapters. The bit with Evil-Lyn and Tri-Klops was very interesting. It'll be nice to see how that plays out in the future. I hope you have another update coming soon!
JtheChosen1
2008-06-28
ch 19,
abuseEXCELLENT STORY! really, this is one the best I have ever read! plz keep up the gr8 work, I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Eerie Iri
2008-04-29
ch 19,
abuseThis is such a good story!
evilmojojojo
2008-04-26
ch 19,
abuseI am totally in love with this story, and i thought you weren't going to complete it. I love this story and i can't wait for the next chapter.
Orlandu
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseI recently bought the He-Man DVDs for the 2002 series, and it made me all nostalgic and stuff. Imagine my suprise when I looked up all the old He-Man fanfiction I used to read and discover that the comic I read I don't know how many years ago is still going! Four years! I've read it all so far and I have to say I approve. A very good job, though I am wondering how it will end. And so, good work, good luck, and good bye. Till next time, I remain your humble fan, Orlandu.
MadaMag
2008-03-31
ch 19,
abuseIt's definitely interesting story, about a difficult theme. Keep going!
Lord Kain
2008-03-30
ch 19,
abuseI'm not sure why Marlena was upset to Teela about picking out an outfit for Adam. Its not like she said she was going to WATCH him change. Unless of course Marlena is covering for some scheme about what Adam is going wear.
Baku babe
2008-03-30
ch 19,
abuseO_O ok...that was...um, interesting to say the least. I think Teela allows herself too much free reign around the Randor and Marlena...not that I have a problem with that, I think it's cute but every time she does that she turns crimson, how can she not notice her own words and actions...actually, I think I know, like they say, Love makes people do crazy things, so unlike them...anyway, great chapter, I enjoyed it very much!
mervoparkite
2008-03-29
ch 19,
abuseI'm SO glad you've gotten back to this story! I've been missing it. (Imagine me Spinning in circles with a big grin each time I see you've posted another chapter)

Wonderful chapter. Nice set of conversations with the "crew"--espcially Felinar--that was cute.

Now, Every time I find a leading man giving that type of reasoning as to why he can't be "with" his lady love, I just want to smack them up-side-the-head. While the concerns may be vaid, the lady should still be given the chance to make her own choices on such things. And Teela certainly wouldn't turn away from Adam. So, its time someone talked some sense into the boy. (there, just what you wanted, someone telling you what to do in your WONDERFUL story--as if you didn't already have it planned out!)

Any way, I'm looking forward to your next update--please don't leave us hanging for to long.
Christy
2008-03-29
ch 19, anon.
abuseWow. So Adam thinks Teela will be left alone if they marry. That's going to be a difficult one to deal with. I like the logical progression.
Silver Warrior
2008-03-29
ch 19,
abusewhoa! Adam's got a real low opinion of his chances of survival, doesn't he?
Morelie
2008-03-29
ch 19,
abuseAnother great chapter! So glad to see your posting on this story again! I enjoy your writing immensely.
wildpartyhouse247
2008-03-29
ch 19,
abuseLove your style of writing.

Just one comment in Chapter 18 you have Teela and Randor discuss how to break it to Adam. I was wondering if it was planned that Teela blurts out what happened?

Either way love the scene and Adams reaction.
SonicH2O
2008-03-29
ch 19,
abuseEarly widowhood! i sure hope not! great chapter. Im so happy your writing this again!
Christy
2008-03-27
ch 18, anon.
abuseVery nice chapter. I'm glad you're continuing this story. I'll be honest, I always though Adam got a horrible deal out of the whole He-Man must be kept secret thing. Sixteen is a confusing enough time without having to act like that. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to seeing what Evil-Lyn and Tri-Klop's do with their newfound knowledge.
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