Such a profound end! I can see her silver hair blowing in the sea wind, waiting for hin to come home to her.

Wow.

I like this. *hugs Celebrían*

So few words yet so much emotion flows from them. This is a beautiful piece, and I hope that it will be enjoyed by many

As always, a fantastic way with words.
And that last line is incredible.

Oh! So few words, so much emotion. Bitter-sweet. *sighs*

omg.. that was beautiful.. i love the description of the Sea, and how the ships leave all sorrow behind, and the Forsaken... lovely... and the description of her hair... though itz short, itz wonderful