A great story. Very good.

Very nice, I think that fits the Count perfectly.

That was beautiful...

where do you find inspiration for such deep stories?

sincerely,

The Princess Anna Valerious

This was beautifully written I love how he says that he feels nothing and yet it is obvious he does feel something but he is no longer capable of reconizing it for what it is.

A beautiful speech, touched me deeply. I guess this is really like Dracula feels. How i wish this speech to be in the movie.

What a writing style! Love it

*sniff* That was sad. I must say, Dracula is my favourite character and you portrayed him very well.
I like how you gave Dracula some background before he was murdered, I've always wondered if he had a life before he died. I mean, of course he did but, did he have any kind of existence before Gabriel killed him.
Anyway, this is really sad, but good at the same time...very good job.

See? This is what was left out of Van Helsing!
I liked how you wrote this. It really improves the "I am hollow..." line.
I detected mild VH/CD slash in the film, and detected it here. Gah, I'm a sucker for male slash.

*sniffs* I loved it... but I wanted to cry. If it weren't for the fact that I felt sorry for him in the first place, this story would have changed my mind.

Nice!

*sob* it's so...sad...that's the reason i love it! *sobs* u can turn a seemingly EVIL character into a lovable person. *sobs* keep writing fics, and try to make them *sniffle* this good.

OMG... Wow, you almost made me cry. I feel so bad for Dracula now... Beautifully written fic.
Arlen

amazing, keep writing

Abso-freakin-lutely BRILLIANT.

*gaping* Oh. Wow. I mean, um... yeah, wow. That was AMAZING! Absolutely stunning! I really don't know how to put my thoughts on this into words. It's just... wow.
Although I think it's kind of amusing that I misread "I remember Gabriel. . . Van Helsing killing me" as "I remember Gabriel. . . Van Helsing kissing me"
And now that I can't get that image out of my head... no, won't start writing VH slash... not yet anyway... 'cause I need to finish my current fic first. :p