   firefly134
2008-05-16 . chapter 3Well i really liked it, except, you KILLED Marishka, she's my favourite, why would you kill her, that just sucks, and Khareesa, i was horified that she was taken to the castle by Dracula at the end right after he KILLED Marishka, because it's so painfully obvious that she is going to be either some mary sue turned into his new replacement bride or just some mary sue who has to survive in the castle without getting turned. Either way it sort of sucks, no offence, also Dracula wouldn't just kill one of his own brides because they 'broke a rule', that's dumb and if he was to kill one of them why did you choose it to be Marishka, anyway i was really dissapointed with the arival in this story of an OC character and by the fact that you had him so simply stake one of his own brides, having him kill Marishka was random and stupid, no offence but that just sucked, and the soon to be mary sue, well that sort of ruins it, though not quite as much as KILLING Marishka, because that just plan blew it, simplye put i hated the fact that you killed Marishka and the new soon to be mary sue OC sucks, no offence. |
 Nightmare1
2004-07-09 . chapter 1"...sometimes she really wished Dracula had chosen someone else for his second bride."
Actually, Verona was his first bride (I read it somewhere in a cast interview, and from the movie, appears to be his favorite). Sorry, I am very picky about little details. But I like this so far.
-Nightmare1 |
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