i love this!

wow, that was really good, I even got all sniffly at the end! I hope theres a sequel, but if not that was a really good ending! I loved it!

Wow, this is a very long and amazing one-shot. It's full of depth and suspense. Great job!

WOW. I've read a lot of Harry/Draco fanfiction, and the flaw I most often see in them most certainly could not be found here!!

In most of the others, I just see completely unexplained slash, which, while it's fun, bugs me sometimes in that the relationship development is totally unrealistic... but I think you NAILED it. This story is one of two I've read so far that I think reasonably explains how their sympathy evolves.

Quite a few times throughout reading this, I found myself saying things like "OH MY GOD THIS IS INTENSE!" or just "HOLY HELL!" It's that powerful.

I also think you did an amazing job of getting inside Draco's head. That, I think, is the most interesting part of any story - what makes the bad guy tick, why is he bad at all? And you did an incredible job of addressing those questions realistically.

Brilliant. Just brilliant. Thanks for posting this! I was blown away.

So sad ;__;
The ending really did it for me.

I almost felt like crying right now...that ending was so sad! T_T

that's actually kinda beautiful

Great story ! I liked it !!

This is so awesome, i was so sucked into the story i didnt realize what time it was...
Its a really great story :)
Im just sad its completed.It would be so cool if in the next chapter they would talk and then kiss or something :D

Hm, the Draco in Eclipse had time to redeem himself. Even though he trapped Harry, by the end, I liked him. This Draco doesn't do enough to make him at all likeable. Even the words he uses to revive Harry are strangely self-centered. In other words, there is no change in any of the characters really, so it has an unfinished feel.

i liked it

Oh, I liked this one. You're stories are really great. I've read it at fictionalley, and you're right, it's better with colours, but as I'm not a member there I'll review here. I really would like to dream that too, perhaps if I read it over and over...?

Very good but sad at the end. It's amazing how you flushed a whole day out and made it seem like years. Have you considered writing your own stuff? You're very good at this. Keep up the good work.

omg! i luved ur story! i kno u mite not want to but if u ever get the urge to write a sequeal i would really love to! i HAVE to kno what happens and mostly harry's reaction later when he gets better! thanx. it was really well written and quite in character! pleze keep writing and i'll check out ur other fics.


BFW

ps- if u already wrote a sequeal then pleze disragard my opinion!

thanx

That was really good. I've read eclipse, handcuffs, convergence, stop the world! Iwanna get off, Cocoa Butter and Of all the Thinhs I've lost. Also, I've read your profile. I recon that your a great autor.