Reviews for Small Two of Pieces

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Puzzleshipped Yuugi 2008-03-15 ch 3,	abusePlease update soon! I miss this story! ;-;
MutaKu 2007-12-04 ch 3, anon.	abusemore please~
punk_llama 2007-02-11 ch 1, anon.	abusehey, i love your story, even before you revised it! i hope you update again soon! looks liek you havent been on in a while but you gotta update sometime!
snowecat 2006-01-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, it's still alive!! I have the stuff you posted the first time and I really liked it. I'm not really a yaoi fan, but the story was great. Is that creep still named 'dustpan?'
dodger 2005-12-11 ch 1,	abuseOMG!! yay I am so glad to see this back up. THis is the first YGO story that I read, and what brought me into the wonderful world of YGO and yaoi ^_^ Went it went down I was so sad, but now its back yay!! ^_^
dizzy 2005-08-07 ch 3, anon.	abuseloved the make-out session between seto & jou!!
Toadychan 2005-06-16 ch 3,	abuseUfufufu... Me again. XD I swear, this discovery has made me so insanely happy. I actually got up and twirled several times around my room, then literally squealed and squished plushies and pillows and just all around flailed about in giddiness. XD I will die if you do not continue on soon. O: Seriously. I will keel over and just... be dead. XD (One thing I thought I'd point out, there are some parts in this chapter and I think the second chapter also where you say Seto in place of Seth.)
Toadychan 2005-06-16 ch 1,	abuseOh. My. God. collapses to knees and bows and kisses your feet I CANNOT BELIEVE IT'S BACK! eyes water A friend directed this story to me when you first posted it what feels like forever ago, back when I was just getting into yaoi, and I swear this changed my life. I love you. XD worshipworshipworship Thank you so much for reposting it! happily reads the next chapters
Squiggle 2005-05-15 ch 3, anon.	abuseI love it! It's kind of sad though, but Yuugi'll be happy with Yami. And I want the uncut version. Hairbrush - You perv Shut up! Stooge.
Bluediamond 2005-04-15 ch 3,	abuseYup, your revision really helped the story~ (Geez, what a late review) As for the use of 'Watashi', it's not THAT feminine. ^^; Like you say, it's more common for girls to use it, but that's because we don't have much else to use. Watashi is more of a formal thing than a girly thing. ^^; Atashi is the really girly one, but havin' Yuugi use THAT would just be wrong. n.n; From one Japanese student to another, I'm really glad that your fic lack appalling Japanese (Like someone who wrote 'Konnechiwa' and someone who tried to say 'Little one' and said 'Chibi ichi'). Japan didn't exist the way we know it back then, but... X3 It's an AU, so it doesn't matter so much. ^^; By the by, LOVE the lack of Anzu bashing (If people want to know what REALLY takes away from a Yuugiou story, I should think Anzu bashing is it). Just as a suggestion, using 'Chichi-ue' would be SO much better for the timeline than 'Otou-sama'. I know you're not too worried about the small details, but Chichi-ue is probably the best way to go in fanfics set in the past. Sorry to be a bug on the Japanese, but the last chapter should either be 'Kowai yume' or 'Kowa no yume'. Kowai is already an adjective, because of the I on the end. 'No' should only be between the adjective and the noun if it's a 'na' adjective, like 'Shizuka', 'Yuumei', 'Benri', 'Kirei' or 'Hen' to list a few. But if you take the I of the end the 'i' adjectives it should turn them in to nouns... But I'd stick with just taking out the no, because it definitely works that way. God, sorry to go off on a huge Japanese rant, especially when you're better than most people out there. n.n; I must sound really arrogant, when I'm probably not even correct. I hope you do update again, you have a lot of fans out there who're desperate for you to post another chapter.
Hikari Raine 2005-04-08 ch 3,	abuseLove this story and i hope you update soon
yami-protector-of-the-mille... 2005-04-01 ch 3,	abuseGreat story, one of my faves before it was taken off, i'd love to be able to read the whole amazing story again, so please write some more soon.
mooopower 2005-02-20 ch 2,	abuseaw poor Joey, being harassed and all. I cant wait til u update this is bound to get exciting!
Rynnal 2005-01-27 ch 3, anon.	abuseWhee! It's back! Dear gods how I love this story. I must've reread the full one a couple billion times listening to one song. And now everytime I listen to that song, I feel like reading the story. Thank the gods it's back! Ryn~
Nemo Sushi 2004-12-07 ch 3,	abuseWill Yugi start to speak English later in the fic? Anywayz, the fic is great!

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