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| Kat 2005-02-08 ch 5, anon. | abusei hope that you will write some more |
| Mara Jade Jedi 2004-11-04 ch 5,  | abuse'Tis good but the formatting makes it really heard to read and very distracting. Well done though1 |
| ichargrl 2004-10-26 ch 5, | abuseHa. you get no review on magnets. I refuse. Teasy little chapters incure only my wrath and constant nagging to write more chapters. Which you should be doing instead of reading this. I'm an impatient kind of fan. A bad habit I know. More good stuff soon? prtty please? |
| Lauren 2004-10-26 ch 5, anon. | abuseInteresting story so far. I can't wait to read more of it. |
| Starr484 2004-10-22 ch 4, | abuseSo what's going to happen?!?!? |
| Dimac99 2004-09-16 ch 4, | abuseI "did" have to go back and re-read because you took so long to post the new chapter (waves pointed finger) but since it's a good story, I don't mind! Please update sooner this time though! |
| NG 2004-09-15 ch 4, | abuseThis chapter was a bit difficult to read without lines between the paragraphs. |
| Butterfly Sedai 2004-09-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat story so far, I'm really enjoying. However, if you would be so kind as to format the last chapter that would be exellent. When all the words are streamed together, with no new paragraphs for people talking, or a change of idea the story gets confusing. Also, when your words/sentences are bunched together the story becomes hard to read on a computer screen. Hope you continue the story, just with better formatting. |
| Hakureiki 2004-09-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseVery good! I hope it doesn't take too long to update as I am very interested as to what will happen. |
| Susan B 2004-09-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseIt's always nice to find a well-written story. :-) I can't wait for more. Poor Sam. You seem to be going the Grace is an alien route, which is as valid as any other supposition. Poor Sam. Tired, short-tempered, rude, see what happens when you are recovering from a concussion and not getting enough sleep? Don't talk too long to update, I want to see where this goes. |
| iamdragonrider 2004-09-14 ch 4, | abuseits getting more and more interesting with each chapter! please continue! PS i like the double spacing in the first few chapters better than the no spacing in the current chapter, its harder to read without the spaces. |
| Lori 2004-09-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseLooking, with great antcipation, for the next part. Good story! Keep writing |
| SG1-Fanfic 2004-09-13 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter. Really looking forward to the next one! |
| SG1-Fanfic 2004-09-13 ch 3, | abuseWow - such wonderful prose: "Moments of millenia, eons of microseconds"...and... "alight with an inner glow that was at once intense as a stellar core yet soft as a lunar reflection"...and.."she sailed through an ocean of her thoughts, the cosmos of her mind" Well-crafted! |
| SG1-Fanfic 2004-09-13 ch 2, | abuseWonderfully written! This line had me ROTFL! "When llamas start spontaneously swearing in French, sir." And this line was very well done: "she let the tears come, mourning the passing of the person she once was, the Carter everyone knew, respected, and loved." |