A great story. I liked the part where Jim was sitting with Sara when she came to.

good fic, i like it

I really liked your story and it was true to the characters. Some of the stories I read have not been believable for this reason. Yours, very good. Please continue writing. I would have liked it expanded perhaps another chapter or two or three. Please!!

I loved this story. It broke my heart and mended it again.
Great stuff.

This was so wonderful! The writing was perfect and the story so full of emotion that I could visualize the whole Grissom jumping off the cliff and emotional plunge. Well done.

This is such a sweet story, with just the right amount of angst to lead to a happy ending. Thanks for writing it.

i loved it please write some more, please

Great story! I really love Grissom being the hero and I have to confess I do love "bedside-reunions"!

AW! that was the best ending Alhtough I'll admit I was kinda hopin git would go on some more, but it was so good really
great

Another clever and well-written story. Kudos to you. It was excellent. It had me holding my breath the entire time Grissom and Sara were in the water!

Keep up your wonderful writing.

That is beautifully written well done. i loved the plot.
well done
Becca

Perfectly Grissomesque - abandoning protocol and jumping in after a CSI, even when he touts protocol so much. To be fair, I think he would have done it for any CSI, but it worked well with Sara. And the ending came off perfectly as well -- no heavy dialogue or "I... have finally realized... THAT I LOVE YOU." Just very in-character, brief statements that stayed with the tone of the series. Good job.

SEQUEAL!

Great story! It was so smooth- like reading a novel- and I'm an avid reader. Transistions from scene to scene- the whole thing. And I'm just saying this in hindsight- I wasn't aware of it as I read because I was so absorbed! Just terrific. You're on my favorite list with just reading 1 story! I can't wait to read more of your stories- bookmarked your page. Gosh, I was right there, in that cold water, trying to get that killer's grip off of Sara. Very exciting rescue! And what a surprise- Grissom just leaping off the cliff! Only thing I could think of was that Sara seemed detached from Grissom at the end. I'll look for a follow up!

I knew I recognized your name! CSI is awesome and so is this story. I love the line, "Me? What exactly did they give you for the pain Gris?" Lol. Sarah and Grissom totally belong together. The story is really well written and a good ending. No spelling mistakes from what I could see. Well done!