please continue soon

Es very good! BUT YOU STOLE PART OF MY FANFIC! CURSE YOU! You had a better beginning the second time around. Ah well. Well? WELL? What are you staring at me for? GET ON WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER! Presque? Danka!
Kaiyuga XD

Well, it's good, but...IT NEEDS TO BE LONGER! Here, if you want a Beta Reader, contact me at and I can give you a few pointers. And I can also help you out on plot problems and how you want to present stuff (otherwise, I'm a lousy Beta Reader!)Well, good luck on writing! Oh, if you want an idea on writing a good fanfic., check out my stuff and see what you think!
Dioh!
Kaiyuga ..

Omg, if Anna is brought back in this one I will seriously scream.

How did they know that? It was 1889. Vans didn't exist yet.