Enjoying this story can not wait for the next part. I hate Ecklie though...

JENNIFER
WARRICK/SARA SHIPPER

Aww man, are you not continuing this story? I really love it and hope to see more of it in the future! :D

very good story. please update soon, i liked this one alot

Reaaly great reading so far. I love where you're going with it... please continue! :)

Good chapter. It was nice to see a little bit of trouble. I'm looking forward to reading about the visit to Dallas. :)

Good chapter. I liked the interaction between Nick and Sara and I thought Ecklie was really well done too - as irritating as ever!

keep it going!

Another great chapter, hope you continue soon

Nice touches wiht the shifty day staff and Grissom losing his paperwork.

I love how you've written the parents. They're wonderfully obnoxious.

Glad they're not my parents. Update soon.

:D Another great chapter, and my god they're definately not the type of people you want as parents, no wonder Sara didn't want them to stay lol :D

Great chapter. My mother wanted to know why I was grinning - I loved that line about Sara getting married without telling her parents... again. Poor Sara, her parents were nuts, but believably nuts. And Nick was great, too.
Good work.

Fantastic chapter. I'm really looking forward to meeting both sets of parents, especially Sara's - they don't seem to come up as much. And I love the sweet way you portray Nick and Sara's relationship.

so sweet~wonder what Nick had written in the card