  haro-haro-chan 2006-12-28 . chapter 3that was so cute~!X3
i liv those two!!XD |
| Tai-Chiian 2006-04-25 . chapter 3 I LOVE IT! so cute! kawai!
bye bye!
Tai-Chiian |
| roxibabe267 2005-02-26 . chapter 3 I can understand why u didnt pair up Ban and Himiko(I know b-cuz I hate Himiko and love Ban too!(lol)) But why Ban and Gingi??!(why WHY!) (Im probably just mad cus i love Gingi too!!) EMAIL ME PLEASE amd tell me if you think my review is fair enough and more about your fanfic! |
| bffimagine 2004-09-06 . chapter 3 haha.
I better go read that sequel |
| ViL 2004-06-06 . chapter 3 Nice ending. Good for a first GB fic. ^_^ |
| ViL 2004-06-06 . chapter 2 oh... Ban's POV. Wiyy!! luv nervous Ban! |
| ViL 2004-06-06 . chapter 1 Ban and Himiko? I dunno bout himiko but Ban recognizes her as a sis only. Poor Ginji.. Natsumi? You should learn how to lie. |
| stalker 2004-06-04 . chapter 3 it wasn't that bad you know! wanna read more stories from you! pls write more! and to make you feel better i suck at grammar to!! plus wey'r not perfect now are we? |
| RekiaReium 2004-05-22 . chapter 3 ...It WAS pretty cute...^_^;
Twas a little too fast-paced for my tastes though.
Oh well.
It was adorable.
Sincerely,
Rekia Reium |
| Jessica 2004-05-22 . chapter 3 Lu gak belajar buat UU, Din? Gw skr lg break dr belajar, endingnya bagus, gw tunggu fanfic lu yg berikutnya! |
| ????? 2004-05-15 . chapter 1 Nice, but i just don't like the title. |
| Jessica 2004-05-14 . chapter 2 Din, gw lagi mabok dan rada panik soalnya hari ini hari Jumat, lu tahu kan betapa banyak tugas yg harus gw kerjakan? Jadi gw pake bahasa Indonesia aja, tapi lu tahu kan siapa gw? Seperti yang gw bilang di SMS kemaren, cerita lu bagus baik plot maupun grammarnya. Tapi sebaiknya chapternya lu bikin panjangan dikit biar orang-orang puas bacanya, ok? Ide lu asli original banget lagipula ceritanya KEREN ABIS! Gw tunggu fanfic lu yang berikutnya lho! Gw juga ada usul, gimana kalo lu buat fanfic yang pairingnya KazukixRen ? Biar gw yang fans Kazuki ini bisa seneng? Cepetan kirim chapter berikutnya ya? |
| Cute-singer 2004-05-12 . chapter 2 Very cute story! I hope they both tell how they feel! ^_~
for a new story writer you sure are great!! Keep it up!
P.S. Very exciting story... ^_^ |
| hidden-golden-eyes 2004-05-12 . chapter 2 ha... nice one... though its short... work on the 3rd chapter okay...
^_^ |
| hidden-golden-eyes 2004-05-11 . chapter 1 it's not bad to commit mistakes... and your good in making a fanfic as a newbie... keep up the good work, i hope we could be friends and update quickly okay?, and i was wondering if you would like to do a fanfic with me?, it's alright if you don't, i was dumped many times... so i think that's all... good luck!
email me sometimes: hidden_golden_eyes@hotmail.com
^_^ |
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