nice

this is very very good!! please please update soon!!

very interesting

Absolutely could not resist:

Omake:

“Musashi-sama, are you sure you want to use your own son for this? He could die!” asked the Third Hokage of his successor.

“As Fourth Hokage I cannot ask another family to give their child for something so dangerous.”

“But you already lost your wife this afternoon during child birth, and now to risk you son? Not to mention the fact that this could kill you too.”

“I know, don’t try to talk me out of this, it is for the good of the village. The Kyubi must be stopped.”

“I understand that but . . .” the Third Hokage began to protest, but a fierce glare from the Fourth Hokage told him to stop.

“I want you to do one thing for me. If I die, take care of my son. I don’t want anyone to know who he really is. It must be a secret what he will soon carry.”

“I will do as you wish but you shouldn’t bother telling me this, I know you’re going to live” the old man Third Hokage said.

"Why?" asked the Fourth and the Third smiled

"Cause Tsunade bet you would die" he said causing the Fourth to sweatdrop

Not going to ost this anywhere but here in this review

great stori but i could deal whith i better ending other that that great job

Great story!, i just read it again. you really should make more, maybe up to where Naruto leaves to prepare for the future (end of arc 1). Good luck with the storyline, the comedy, and making Sasuke like the way he is in real life.

I love the storline. It has adventure, comedy, and makes you dying to read the next chapter. You should DEFINENTLY write more to the story. If not, then you should make more stories. I can't wait to see what you are going to write next!

I don't know if we are allowed but I would like to reply to dbc's review. The Furth Hokage is dead and the leaders of the Akatsuki are Pein and Uchiha Madara. I can see this fiction is abandoned but it was a wonderfully written fic while it lasted. I bid you goo day...May the FORCE be with you...>.

I promised myself that I would only read completed stories but this story was to good not to read! Hope ya update soon.

damn it the 4th hokage doesnt die he gets killed by naruto at the end of naruto shippuden

update soon

more write more~~!

This is an awsome story! The way you write it makes me beleve that it could have been the achual Naruto story! Please keep it up!

That's really good.
You should update soon.
It's so rare to see that kind of relationship between Gaara and Naruto.
Mostly it's only friendship or *shudder* Yaoi.

I would have thought that Sakura would stop being bitchy especially after what Naruto AND Sasuke said during the Genin test and the advice Naruto gave her during the Wave arc.

Too bad you killed off Haku.

Cool story