That is the probably cutest thing I've read in a long time! xD Keep it up!

Lt. RaIQ

Wheeheehee~ I like! -grins- Aoshi with "wire-rimmed glasses" -sighs- I wonder why they never gave him any in the anime or manga. He would look so much more freaking hot *-* -nosebleed-
I think you did a great job. Is the pocky stick increasing your sex appeal really true ahaha? -grins madly- I LOVE POCKY!
I especially liked the beginning (heehee) and this part: There goes a meditation time. Goodbye meditation time. See you again soon, hopefully.
Very well written! Hope to see more one-shots from you!

-duckii mustang-

P.S. - always write Aoshi with glasses =P

gah..lols. Only our poor Aoshi would be take something as innocent as Pocky as a drug of some sort lols. Well it was like a drug, if you are adictee. I'm a proud one. =] This ficlet is so cute. Great job.

o... wat was the pockey stick flacor? chocolate? strawberry?? LMFAO

*twitching* This fic is SO hysterical! And FINALLY! An author who CAN write kissing scenes! WOOT!

aw!lol! :]

Oh me gawd...THAT WAS SO CU...*takes in air*...UTE! Ah...man your stories kick A$$ te-he...~_-

"Hell, he's always hot anyway." Amen to that.
Other than a few conflicting word tenses and that Jade probably shouldn't be capitalized, not bad.

hahahha that was good

Hi..!
Nice one shot! I really liked it. It was one of those things that make me want to pig out on chocolate or hug to death a boy (and seeing as I have no one at hand, I had to pick chocolates -_-)
Anyway! I hope to hear from you soon..!
Buh bye!

hmm...i've been hearing a lot of these pocky things lately...does it really work? hmm...better get one next time...it might be a little waffy, as you might say, but it sure does show another perspective of aoshi! good work! it works as a good one-shot too, though...

Kawaii! Yattaa another challenge fic. I liked this it was real sweet. Ah, who wouldn't want an aoshi-sama... ^__^ Keep up the good stuff!

I really liked this fic, but what about happily ever after? I think that´s one of the best I´ve read, please update soon

i loved it! and the pocky/incense thing was hilarious. ^_^

I love it it was so...Kawai oh and thanks for reviewing