 Dimonah Tralon 2004-05-28 . chapter 1Loved the last line! Great job with this story! I really enjoyed it. |
 Amorous Malboro 2004-05-14 . chapter 1This is so cute! I love how Shigure spied on them...*donates fondue kit* Now you can melt your cheese without getting bad reviews!! Cheese is yummy...^-^ |
 ookami cherry blossom 2004-05-12 . chapter 1oh my god ! this story is so kawaii plz update it soon. |
 KyosKitten 2004-05-12 . chapter 1Ahh!! I loved it! It got a lil disturbing when it got to the tongue part cuz it seems outta character for the two of them. A kiss like theirs should be innocent but loving, strong but forceful. Just a quick lil peck on the lips kinda. ::shrugs:: I still thought it was great though! Especially when Shigure walked in! That made me laugh! Good job! |
 Alatril Carnesr 2004-05-11 . chapter 1*laughs* That's so sweet... a little OOC, but sweet never the less. ^_^ |
 Aura Black Chan 2004-05-11 . chapter 1This is soo good it deserves another chapter! So as they say, update please! |