Another good one!! see I told you you'd be getting more reveiws from me! I don't know why but I just love the structure of the poems! This is the second one I've read of yours! Keep it up!! ttfn

OMGs! That was really beautiful! Wow! Awesome poetry! It's on my favorite stories! And thank you so much for your wonderful review!

That...I think I might like it more if I knew what the heck it was talking about- but as i've said before, its all good, so keep it up!

Alright, you must be sick of me by now, but I just can't get enough of your stories! They're all so wonderful!
But I think I'll leave you alone now...^^;

Ye!! Taking another break from writing to (once again *finally!!*) read others' works.

Really nice, Thief!! I think you captured an Elf's longing for the sea along with her fear of venturing forth and her love of her forest really well.

. . . and Kurama's right! You *do* have a way with describing things sometimes!! LOL Luv ya!

pretty good. i like the theme. one small grammatical error in the last stanza. don't know if it was deliberate. "Looking, but do not knowing what to do" u have a double negative. it should be "looking, but not knowing what to do" no "do" there. i like the description of the Sea & the references back 2 the forests.

...Whoa. That was like... amazing. I'm speechless and blown away. It was like something Tolkien would put in the books, ya know? It was beautiful! And your rhyming is wonderful as well, and I feel like an elf really would have said that. You're good at poetry. When are you gonna make one about Hiei, though? I'm really looking forward to that one. Write more poetry!

Lovely.