|Reviews for Crystalline|
| JayLiyah 2/4/06 . chapter 1
This was a wonderfully accurate take on Rinoa's thoughts and emotions. You definitely seem to have a thorough understanding of the main characters. Beautifully written fic.. I wish I had that much talent like you. It was jsut perfect, keep up the good work!
| Ashbear 8/20/05 . chapter 1
I think once and awhile you just have to sit back and be so engrossed in something that everything else seems to fade away... this is how you write. I am simply amazed... this is beautiful. I do remember your name from awhile back, and remember your works being something very intimating to me... which they still very much are. Your writing is something far above what most of us could dream of achieving. I’m not sure if you will see this, but I honestly hope you do...I saw that you were a friend of Elise and her story had stuck in my mind for years. There are some of us that just try to write, and then there are people like you who manage to capture everything... just amazing.
| kakumeimei 7/30/05 . chapter 1
Once again, I am stunned by your amazing writing skills! And you like Tori Amos too, which is another reason for me to think that you're awesome. ("Winter" is one of my favorite songs. :)) I'm adding you my favorite authors list!
| Pretty Green Eyes 7/28/04 . chapter 1
This was beautiful, emotional, thoughtfull, honest and brilliant.
I loved the way you combined the "eyes on me" lyrics with all the events that happened, you pulled it off excellently!
From what I've read, you are an excellent writer!
| elsie 6/22/04 . chapter 1
hey bay-beh. ) you know you always make me amazed and awed and completely speechless with the incredibleness that is all you. i love the way you write and i see you shining in it. will always love and adore the way you shine. ) so well done, so smart and so real. oh, what a real winter will do to a western girl... _ i don't have any more words that will present, as clearly as you give emotion here, how proud i am... wish i wrote like you do, honey. ) all my love! post more!
| Maggie 5/12/04 . chapter 1
This is really well written. And it ends with a Tori Amos quote! Perfect! I don't know what else to say... Your descriptives are awesome. Keep writing!
| Angelprinczess 5/12/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful take on Rinoa's feelings about getting sealed away. The descriptions were so vivid that I could honestly feel the winter conditions you were describing. Wonderful job!
| rEnika 5/12/04 . chapter 1
This is about one of the best fics about Rinoa's thoughts on the sealing ever. You have a talent with words and expression. Use it. I love this fic and really hope for more to come... please?
P it really is very good!
| lendmemoni 5/11/04 . chapter 1
Whoa...thats all i can say! Its wonderful, fantastic! extraordinary! It was really good! Its like 80 degress in my house but, when i read this story, it gave me chills down my spine. So detailed with great vocabulary! And so sad too...so what are you gonna do about Rinoa? ARe you going to make it simular to the game? or turn another path? i think you should twist it a bit! but maybe your doing that right now...anywho just keep writing because im loving it and so will others! If your bored check out my corny stories! lol im gonna go and eat my cookie now. *slips out of room...peeks out the door and plops back on the chair* I HAVE TO READ IT AGAIN! o_0
| Rose-Wisteria 5/11/04 . chapter 1
Your story is awesome. Absoultely descriptive and detailed with thoughts into it. Right now it looks to me like a one-shot story. This piece of work shows that you can become a great author one day. I always like to see more sad tones like yours than comedies. Great job.
| Slipper 5/11/04 . chapter 1
I really love this, its so wonderfully written I could imagine everything so vividly in my mind. Your descriptions of Squall were particularly wonderful.
I guess its a one-shot? I don't think another chapter is necessary, it seems to end perfectly here but if another is added I will definately return and read.