A very good start to the story if I say so myself.

I've read a lot of fics about angels and heaven but i definitly like this one the best

Great story. You let in on a possible follow-up story. I hope you continue your writing. I can't wait to read more.

Great story! n.n But at the end, it sounds like it has a squel, does it?

truly awesome story!

I absolutely love it. I can't wait for the sequal. Good Luck in all that you do. Thank you for writing this. Well...Ja ne! Adeui!

this is my favorite story ever! i had a good time reading it, thank you for writing wonderful stories!

Don't worry about grammer and such mistakes. I couldn't critique if my life depednded on it. I love the story. Iw ill continue later, but it is late. So good luck and it doesn't say complete so if it isn't please do finish it. I am enjoying it. You don't have to id you don't want to. Oh and I think it is cool that you are Sweedish. Did I spell it right? ^_^! Well...Ja ne! Adeui!

Thats a cruel way to end the story >.<

Is there going to be a sequal?

;_; that...was so wonderful!! it has brung me to tears! ;_; you wrote this fic so well! i love your twistes and turns, i cried and was happy and i scared everyone in my house because of my swift "mood swings" ^__^ i really did LOVE this fic!! :3 it was written so well and the emotions was displayed so nicely!! wonderful job!!

Hey! Great story! The ending was a little wierd though. Keep writing!

The end? What is that a joke, thats not an ending thats a cliff hanger! *cries* crap im gonna be dreaming about this for a while _

Now with that out of the way... did you edit this? I cant begin count the times I saw chocked instead of shocked and forward instead of towards, and sometimes words where missing, out of order, or somehow lost letter making it look like the jumble you get when you smack the key board.

It was an awesome story I wont deny it, and I would love to read more, I hope there’s a sequel, if theres not *gets depressed*, although you should take an extra hour or two and reread your chapter before you post it, and by reread I dont mean skim I mean reread OUT LOUD! I cant stress that enough, actually look at it as you read it and dont just mutter it in your head, actually pronounce it so you can catch grammar mistakes and parts that just plain dont make sense.

Now with my writer’s criticisms out of the way... *squeals* THAT WAS SO AWSOME! I went nuts when I read the part with the people standing with the devil and it mentions one with green eyes and one with a grey and blue eye. I NEW it was gonna be Hisoka and Muraki. But what happened to the one with the blue eyes? I could have swore there was a third with them, I though maybe it would be Shiro... Hm... ^_^

^_^

OOH, that was hilarious and don't go on about your being Swedish, you just need your imagination to express your story and grammer doesn't matter.
You are an excellent writer, sorry I didn't log in for this. Where did that come from? just saying I write too. Anyway, I am going to read more stories of yours, you have more, right?
You definitely have real talent, thinking up everything like that and it all makes sense. However did you put it all in words and make a serious story like this have some funnies in it as well?
Well, congrats that you finished and I want you to know it was coolio. 'kay?

aww!the end already?*wails*oh...but wait..there`s a sequel!*O.O*O.O*O.O*!YAY!*O.O*O.O*O.O*O.O*

hrm...I better calm down...it was so sweet,the way you made Hisoka and Tsuzuki meet again!!I was all aw-ish(a word me and my sis uses*lol*) all the way...and I love the way Muraki is written in this ficcy!he is such a beloved good guy here..and he and hijiri makes me go all aw-ish too*sniffles*

it`s so damn sad that it is over..now...

Nicholas:cheer up,there is a sequel to the story!chill out man!

*sigh*okay nicky..for once I`ll listen to you*lol*

*takes a bow in honour*

leave 'em alone.