Reviews for Love When You Least Expect It

Reviews For: Love When You Least Expect It

egastin77 2005-06-24 ch 1,	abuseI loved this story. great job.
Greenleaf7 2005-06-15 ch 1,	abuseThat was good. Action, fluffy bunnies, funny. All rapped up into this fic. applauds Write more Beka/Rhade fics. ~Ivory Core~
Beka Rhade 2005-05-19 ch 1,	abuseExclent and yes you should write more Beka/Rhade stuff.
Anchante 2004-10-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseI almost never bother to review a fic I don't 'really' like since some people can't take critisizm and I don't want to hurt any feelings.However I feel that in your case its different. It wasn't the fic that was bad.Or the idea.They were both actually not that bad.I feel from what I've read of your writing that you have it in you to do better. A little bit of description.More attention to small details.A little bit of tensiobn and that would have been an Excellent story. Keep on writing, you have it in you, but try and experiment with your techniques a bit. Looking forward to reading more fics from you in the future.Best wishes! -Anchante
Goth Craze 2004-08-23 ch 1,	abuseDefinitely write more fics! u are really good!
Christieanne-Anna 2004-08-17 ch 1,	abusewrite more stories. this is good
joisu 2004-05-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou need to writte more about beka and rhade or at lest i need to read more please writte more
artemis moonshine 2004-05-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh hell yes! you should write more of them together!
Jenn11 2004-05-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseLoved it. And definately more Beka/Rhade. You write them very well. Everyone seemed to be very true to character.
jade 2004-05-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love it, please write more Beka/Rhade stories.
prin69 2004-05-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseloved it! please write mor. there can never be enough beka/rhade fanfic in the world. EVER!! great fic. seriously. i really liked it. cute how rhade had to keep her awake. and she listened! i would probably fall asleep. lol. can't wait to see what you write next. c ya! happy writing!

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