  mellombror 2007-10-15 . chapter 19a wery good story but could you please continue the story it is wery interesting, please continue!
thanks for great story
chris |
| prin69 2005-12-07 . chapter 19 very cool |
| Troll99 2005-12-06 . chapter 19 You just keep on making it more and more complicated and with each chapter somehow more hopeless for Rommie and Dylan. So, now even Dylan gets some visions. What a surprise that they're visions of Rommie. :-) And Trance and Michelle know each other? Perhaps together they could really help Dylan.
But in spite of everything I still gain hope that this might end well. You wouldn't let Rommie turn into mindless machine or worse even, kill her. Would you? |
| prin69 2005-11-30 . chapter 18 oh, awesome chapter. |
| Kirei Baka Kasumi 2005-11-30 . chapter 18 Wow... Awesome chapter. What'll happen next?! Update soon! |
| Troll99 2005-11-30 . chapter 18 Wow, I almost thought you forgot to update this story. You're not making it easy for anyone, right? Not for Rommie, not for Dylan and the least for us, readers. Just be careful not to harm Rommie too much! :-(
I hope you'll be able to update soon. |
| Jade Rhade 2005-11-17 . chapter 17 Very interesting. I';m at school, so i can't say much, but i like the twist. keep working on this, i really like it! |
| Jade Rhade 2005-11-17 . chapter 16 that's not very nice! BRAINWASHING?! a, ive done that in my fics. So much fun! off to read the next chapter... |
| prin69 2005-09-20 . chapter 17 yayness |
| prin69 2005-09-20 . chapter 16 o, cool |
| Kirei Baka Kasumi 2005-09-20 . chapter 17 OH! Okay, evil chick should not be treated liek that by evil Mr. C! She should leave and help Dylan. And Uh-OH! Mr. Mitchell aint gon' be so nice anymore... Thats not a good thing. Big Bad red and Ugly is gonna get inside information, which, of course, is never good. And now he has Rommie.. Just when Dylan is WILLING to admit his feelings out loud to... aw... Thats just not good... An dthe fact that they might not be able to save her to save a planet... Thats so sad! Anways, great chapter. i hope you do update soon. Lots of love!
-Kasumi |
| Karakin 2005-09-13 . chapter 16 good story i really like it and i love rhade im so glad you put him in your story please update soon |
| max 2005-09-10 . chapter 16 i just found your story today. YOU AREN'T WRITING FAST ENOUGH. HURRY UP. thanks |
| Kirei Baka Kasumi 2005-09-09 . chapter 16 WOW... LONG time do update-y... Good chapter though. So the Aybss is planning to brainwash her... cant wait for that to happen! great chapter, update soon! |
| max 2005-04-26 . chapter 15 found your story today. always like the dylan centric ones.keep up the ggod work. good story |
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