I have to say that I found the story interesting. The ONLY problem that I have with it is that you transformed Moby into one hell of a git. Psymon and Moby are fav characters, so yeah. Ah well, good story anyway

Aww... this was such a good story! It made me cry a little... hehe! I kinda like seeing Psymon out of character a little it's great!

Very cool. I really don't think I like Morgan as much as Stark though, heeheehee. Moby -deserved- to get punched, just for being annoying in SSXT. Very good story, and I -would- like to see a few more!

I like this story: an interesting twist in there that changes your perspective on everybody's favorite psycho

o...nice job. I never thought i would see a nice psymon in a story, even though he is my fav character in the games. mice twist on him!

OMG greay story!! Psymon is way out of character. But it is an amazingly awesome story. Yeah and Griff is GRIFF not GRIF. FANTASTICO!

wow. that must have been the fastest update ive seen in a long long time. well i liked, loved it, agian! u should defenetly add a sequel to it. thatwould be sick. hope to hear from u soon!
sincerly,
CoLLiSiOn

That story was so great... Marisol is a **!
I'm glad it ended it was real good. NICE WORK ON YOUR FIC
BTW...grifF :P

yayayayayayay NO ZOE/PSY W00T
** hate that pairing
Just some things though. Your spelling. It's paYne I should know that's my second name too. And BrodI
Other wise I love this story!
*Adds to favourite authors*

VERY ORIGANAL. I LIKE. IM THE AUTHER OF IRON JAWED AND ADDICTED TO PAIN I WILL BE UPDATEING SHORTLY, AS SOON AS I FIND SOME FLOPPY DISCS. CANT WAITFOR ORE CHAPTERS.
SINCERLY,
CoLLiSiOn

I like this... It's good... but no Psy pairings... I think it's good without pairings. It's constructive and no ones tried it.
Update soon!