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acepro Evolution 2007-11-12 . chapter 1
brilliant
Jaja 2006-06-02 . chapter 17
This was a very interesting idea, and you pulled it off really well! It was neat seeing how the episodes played out differently; you managed to give enough similar points that I could tell where we were in the series, but not enough to make it boring. And the end...!! Very creepy, and very good. I'm definitely going to be reading the sequel. Thanks for such a great Evo fic!
ToughAssGothWhoWillKickYourAssIfYouDon'tWriteASequel 2005-01-05 . chapter 17
My screen name says it all,you rock so hard.
Reddfire 2004-08-29 . chapter 2
usually i dont like anti jott things or jean recruiting late but this is good.
Raphaella 2004-08-29 . chapter 17
oh man that was awesome! And that was a cruel ending, you evil author! I loved everything, man, you did such a great job with this, I couldn't stop reading the rest of it. I'm just sorry I cudn't read it sooner.
Firefly25 2004-08-08 . chapter 17
As - I believe - Winston Churchill once said, "This is not the end; neither is it the beginning of the end. Rather, it is the end of the beginning."
The presence of a sequel is pretty much a slam-bang certainty, to which I will respond with another quote:
"Cry havoc, and let slip the dogs of war."
Mats Forsen 2004-07-14 . chapter 17
The end? No... must.. have.. more.
enfant-terrible 2004-07-13 . chapter 17
OMG this is one of the best what if stories ive ever read and i read alot !!

i cant wait for your sequel
Wen1 2004-07-12 . chapter 17
great, we're waiting for the continuation so, and I'm waiting for some Jott :-)
Wen
furygrrl 2004-07-11 . chapter 17
::exhales heavily:: What an ending...
I can't believe it - you pulled a reverse Carol Danvers on us! Jean and Rogue are now one in the same, apparently with my grrl in the driver's seat! (Unless it was more like some kinda telepathic switcheroo thing?) In any event, this latest plot twist has serious potential - it opens up so many possible avenues for the sequel to take, I couldn't even begin to speculate what we'll be treated to next! Your assurances of more evil-Jean are heartening, but (at the risk of sounding like an ungrateful, pitiful whiner) I'd like to put my order in for some more Jean-centric romance *if* it's at all doable. It's cool if you've already got stuff planned without that aspect, but I'd thought I'd plead for it regardless. ;D
Other than that...BRING ON THE SEQUEL!
LadyEvils 2004-07-11 . chapter 17
Oh, creepy. Glad to know Lance is ok (apart from having to eat Kitty's food everyday), but poor Irene! And poor Rogue. I can't wait for the sequel, and I've just relised Im away at the start of August and will miss the start! Oh well, it'll be something to look forward to. This is a great story, and I'm sure the sequel will be just as good.
evils
DemonRogue 2004-07-11 . chapter 17
oh the ending was great. i cant wait for the sequel!
Carol J 2004-07-11 . chapter 17
A great ending for a fantastic story! I'm already looking forward to the sequel.
XX-Goth-Gal 2004-07-11 . chapter 17
And So it ends... (Wipes a tear from her eye) What a great one it was. I followed it from start to finish and was gagging for more all the way! I meant it when I said you could get a job in writing, Stan Lee would be proud!
And I just cant wait for the sequal!
Will it have our fave goth fighting for possestion of her body? or will she be lost in Jeans original and wake up with a red head? If Jean has rogues powers and rogue wakes up with they return to her? or will she get that ever elusive first touch of another person? There is so much you can do with the sequal I dont know if I can wait for it to come out in August! But what ever and when ever it comes out, I know it will beat the pants off any other fan-fic out there! Would all your fans lie?

Write you in your next story!
UncannyAsianGirl 2004-07-11 . chapter 17
Jeebuz... so Jean has completely supplanted Rogue's psyche? Ouch...
If I think about it, in the comics, on ocassion, it's happened before, but a permanent absorbtion? Yikes. But I doubt that Rogue's just gonna roll over and take it, after all, Jean did kill her mother.
Just wow... this takes the whole phrase, "I am my own worst enemy" to a whole new level... XD Man oh man, that is just such an awesome idea. I've had a similar one, but not with Jean, and not with the whole supplanting thing either. I've got to give you major points for originality on that one. It's just... creepy. XD
Is there gonna be a Rogue/Danvers-esque battle for dominance going on? You'd probably have a ton of fun having Rogue seemingly go totally schitzo and beating the stuffing out of herself.
Is anyone going to be able to tell of the switch? I'm sure that Jean wouldn't be able to continue the masquerade for long... Oh, and there's a whole other factor to explore. The one that involves Rogue's inability to control her powers stemming from a psychological issue. Ya know, when the Danvers personality was dominant, and she touched Psylocke and nothing happened? Oh gosh, there are just so many possibilities open here, and I can't wait to see what you do with them. Have fun writing the sequel, so until next time, buh-bai!
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