well done. well written. great job. loved it.

Interesting twist on the 'sparring leads to sex' cliche. I like it. :)

O...Wondy's got a playmate! :P

Great story. Just great.

The Bat rocks.An awesome one-shot.

Very sensual and very in tune with their characters. I loved how you didn't reveal too much through out the course of the story, yet did a great job SHOWING us the story and not telling us the story. Excellent work.

Wow...this is awesome. Great imagery and introspection. I love how you played out the whole match. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for more stuff.

I've always loved the way those two fought and sparring! Great job Artemis!!