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| xanderfig 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abusewell done. well written. great job. loved it. |
| Amarin Rose 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseInteresting twist on the 'sparring leads to sex' cliche. I like it. :) |
| The Sequestered Princess 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseO...Wondy's got a playmate! :P |
| MrManiac 2004-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story. Just great. |
| Knight's Shadow 2004-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe Bat rocks.An awesome one-shot. |
| Jack 2004-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery sensual and very in tune with their characters. I loved how you didn't reveal too much through out the course of the story, yet did a great job SHOWING us the story and not telling us the story. Excellent work. |
| SxStrngSamurai13 2004-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWow...this is awesome. Great imagery and introspection. I love how you played out the whole match. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for more stuff. |
| Batlove 2004-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've always loved the way those two fought and sparring! Great job Artemis!! |