 Lilyvess 2006-06-12 . chapter 1well done. well written. great job. loved it. |
 Amarin Rose 2005-12-10 . chapter 1Interesting twist on the 'sparring leads to sex' cliche. I like it. :) |
 The Sequestered Princess 2005-10-12 . chapter 1O...Wondy's got a playmate! :P |
 MrManiac 2004-09-11 . chapter 1 Great story. Just great. |
 Knight's Shadow 2004-05-21 . chapter 1 The Bat rocks.An awesome one-shot. |
 Jack 2004-05-14 . chapter 1 Very sensual and very in tune with their characters. I loved how you didn't reveal too much through out the course of the story, yet did a great job SHOWING us the story and not telling us the story. Excellent work. |
 6StringSamurai13 2004-05-11 . chapter 1Wow...this is awesome. Great imagery and introspection. I love how you played out the whole match. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for more stuff. |
 Batlove 2004-05-11 . chapter 1 I've always loved the way those two fought and sparring! Great job Artemis!! |