realy good so far its a good plot keep up the good work

... I have no words for how utterly bad that was - Kara is an utter Mary Sue. 100% Mary Sue. And a horrible one at that.

Hey! I saw that you reveiwed mine and Whispyraven's story (9Secrets and Lies are diffrent)). And I just wanted to say that this story is Rockin awesome! I give it 4 out of 5 which, incase you don't kno, is good!

that was good, this story is going really well, even if it is only the second chapter! i really want to see more.

thanks for revewing my fic too.

anyway, keep writing!

That was pretty good. Can't wait to see what happens next. Just one little suggestion-I think Sirius should be just a little more in Character i mean he just lost his best friend. Anyway, apart from that it was good. The end is very suspensful(is that a word?). neway, thanks for reviewing my fic too! Hehe, i always check out what fics my reviewers have wrote. It's my way of saying thanks, so thanks!

Interesting but keep going.

why bother with this two line post at all then?

HURRY HURRY HURRY I CANT WAIT I WANNA READ MORE!

Hey... i do not kno you but i kno lizzy so i was just roamin around (bored to death) n got to ur site ... wow this is good...but i thought that the potter's house was burned down and that shouldn't kara have her father's last name instead of her mom... even her mom had potter as her last name... ok i'll go back to readin it more... bye

write more chapters

hey! That was good!

very good story so far!! i really enjoyed it. please keep writting, i would like to know what happened. please, if you want to, read and review my other stories, in my profile, thanks and god luck ith your story. i also look forward to more fanfics written by you.

Not bad, that's a pretty good begining. One suggestion, try to use fewer parenthesis, incorporate the informatin you put in them into the rest of sentence. It'll improve the flow of the story. Anyways, keep going, it'll be interesting to see what happens next.