It's good. But why U making Egypt sound like such a bad place? It's not that bad. as a matter of fact it's relly great. Have YOU ever BEEN to Egypt in the first place? I know I have. I'm half Egyption and I've been to that place every year of my life. You ain't secluded from all society even if your doing archiological findings. and if the sun does get really hot you can wear flipflops. Intisar ain't an Egyption name. The people there are really nice and a guy cheating on you is rare. I know I'm talking about about a lot of people an entire country but I know these people. The majority of them anyway. I 'm not saying Egypt is perfect 'cos no land is, I'm just saying it doesn't deserve to be described that bad.

thats kool that they can talk through dreams are you going to update soon please do!

good story, update again soon

they learned about eachother, talked, and decided to meet in 1 night aka dream
gr!
if only that could happen with me and that gu-...um, nevermind
hehe

love it cant wait for ur next one

wow...
for a first fanfiic, it's good!
but does Inuyasha dye his hair actually?
and how come they could connect with each other?