Ok...i like your thought process. I like where it takes you in your story. I like the plot. However, i find myself often intensely confused. I feel like you often say things in the story that may make perfect sense to you, but that you never realy explained to us. Which is difficult for us since we cant read your mind. I find myslef having a really difficult time explaining exactly what it is that disrupts the reading process, but if you would let me revise a chapter for you, i would show you what i am talking about. I think you have great potential, but you simply have to work on piecing your thoughts together so that they dont contradict each other and create a fluidity that allows the reader to become completelty immersed in you writing. By the by, if this doesnt make alot of sense, its because its 6:30 am and i havent slept yet. But i would love it if you would email me and allow me to beta one of your chappies.

Oh my god; I love this story so much. So...tantilizing and dark, yet sweet and sensual as well at times. Man, you really just made my night with this...I couldn't stop reading it!!

But that teaser at the end was just plain wrong.

lol...hope you update soon. I will be looking for one!

Much

Wow, I really hope you're planning on continuing this one..you really know how to rope a reader in! This is a great so far, and I can't wait to read more.

Egad this story is beautifully done! It most definitely deserves more reviews! Hmm ... it might have to do with the summary, which is good but a tad bit vague. Anyway on with the praise! I just absolutely adore this story and I shall continue to check this lil' sucker for udpates til' my fingers fall off. But seriously, it is a nice change from most of the IY stories I have read and I had to sort through about 50 pages at to find it. Big kudos to you on spelling and grammar, but I believe I caught a few error, but no one's perfect. So with that being typed and proclaimed, I plead that you update! I will grovel if necessary.

Au Reviour

i just read the whole thing and it is amazing, i like it. the suspense is killing me. i cant wait to see what happens

Wow, each chapter gets more amazing as you delve deeper into Kagome's memories of Inuyasha. I can't wait to see what happens when they actually meet! :)

Why doesn't Kagome ever tell those supposed friends to go do something physiologically impossible? They've caused her more grief short of Naraku.

Good grief girl...the cliffy...it's killing me!

He's finally back...and I'm dying for dialogue between them! There's so much to be said...7 years is a mighty long time.

Also, just curious...the lime/lemon scene you inserted...is that just a figment of Kag's imagination? I mean, from what I understand, Inu and Kag shared one night together and then the next morning he was gone.

The lemony scene didn't quite strike me as a flashback of that one night...or was it?

Please update quickly...you've left me on the edge. Is it really Inuyasha she's seeing? I certainly hope so...

EK! Such a good story you have begun! You have an official groupie, now. I am so very pleased and proud of you! I likey. I most definitely likey! Although, I really hope she kicks the sorry bastard in the head when he shows up. Just once. Then, they could commence with the luvvins. But he does need a good boot to the head...perhaps the groin as well. Hm...I think I would just punch him in the head...I digress. Anyhoo, great story. I am looking forward to the rest.

This is a really great story, so sad and angsty. You have an amazing writing ability for a 13 year old, I'm impressed! Anyways, I'm waiting for the next chap, so keep up the good work!

i love where you're going with this story. i was thinking that the billionaire's son was going to be inuyasha, i was happy that it wasn't going to be the obvious. keep up the writing and i cant wait for the next chapter

Oh gosh...the end of this chapter just made me cry!

I was reading through Ch 3 just dreading the whole Hojo-Kagome interaction because it's just wrong! Not that she shouldn't try and move on, but she's clearly not past Inu and Hojo, dear sweet oblivious Hojo expects too much.

If only 7 years have passed, does this mean that Inu tracked Kagome by coming through the well? So the well is still open? I think I'm a dork but what does "7 years have passed and 49 years have settled in its place" mean?

And is Inu now full demon but in control of himself? His ability to write a beautiful note implies that that's the case.

Sorry for the questions. But your fic is tugging on my emotions and all these thoughts are churning in my head.

I so want them to be together - they deserve it..even if there has to be heartache along the way.

Your writing is wonderful and the direction of your plot is unique...but so tragic.

I am an ardent Inu-Kag fan and the idea of Inu abandoning Kagome so that he can become full demon - and after they actually consumated their relationship - is heartbreaking.

Is there any way he can be redeemed? Not only for his sake...but for hers? She's loved him for so long...she deserves the man she loves. Sigh. I get too impassioned about this. ;)

But your writing is great...even tho now I just feel so sorry for Kagome - alone and imagining that she's embracing Inuyasha even tho it's really Hojo.

O i love it hurry up and update please!

Look a new story. And you didn't tell me when we talked either. It's a really good beginning and I would like to see how far you can take it. Keep writing and I will review.
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