Excellent story, I really like your dark interpretation of the meeting of these three iconic heroes, and i wuld like to read more regarding this story, my e-mail is jim1esquire googlemail,com

man i wish you'd complete this story... this is as good as it gets

I will never understand why u let such a beautiful Project go. It makes more sence than the actual dc versions. Hell u could sell this Idea or make it published and then comic cartoon and realtime movie this. Consumers would eat this up it already have a nolan touch on it. Actually it would fit right behind the up coming dark knight movie this is perfect.

I will never understand why u let such a beautiful Project go. It makes more sence than the actual dc versions. Hell u could sell this Idea or make it published and then comic cartoon and realtime movie this. Consumers would eat this up it already have a nolan touch on it. Actually it would fit right behind the up coming dark knight movie this is perfect.

I'm iffy on this. Clark is a pussy in this, plain and simple, and his storyline is terrible. I thought you were going for the remodeled version of Clark from "Earth One" Comic that recently came out, like a more confused Clark about his place in the world, but he is terrible.

Bruce is too quick on the uptake, he's sharp, but Diana and Clark always confused him.

Diana, being on Lex's arm?... Nuff said...

Well damn. This is incredibly well written and ironic and dark very very dark and I would like to see it conclusion. I find it fascianting how they all ended up as they did. So clark had an accident with his heat vision activating huh nad it traumatized him. Diana's all gung ho and running all false information and in unbearable arrogance doesn't see it or realize it. Bruce just brutalized one of the most innocent and kind man in existence and fed him to the sharks by accident by leaving him vulnerable to Bruce. Bruce somehow didn't see the Clark not a killer and did not deserve a beating or what he would got if he owned up to the biological malfunction that was as controllable as nocturnal emissions or wetting the bed but with far graver ramifications. I like your story and would like to continue it. It is good and ironic really.

Why did clark freeze in hypertime he should have had hours.

Perfect one two three TIMBER to Clark.

To people wanting to read this story in its screenplay state, try googling for: simply scripts trinity alex mckinnon

..and you should find a pdf file listed as one of the first search results!

As for the difference between this version and the screenplay. Well, both had their pros and cons. Diana was probably a bit too mentally hardened in the ff version (although still with that naivity of hers, but mostly due to being experieneced with the human world), yet she seemed almost a bit too soft in the ss version. So I'm not sure which version I prefer. Oh, and her set to prevent a certain someone, and then turning out she had a hand in creating him...

Great writing!

ok its realy sad that after all the time and the review you got that you never updatet this great story.

maybe just maybe the muse of writing will kiss you again and you will continue this...and bring this nice story to an end.

greetings Diana

Interesting story!

zomgstillnoupdatefinishpleese /annoy

Holy...I...this is frickin' awesome. Only E Kelly has achieved the mastery of Batman's portrayal that you have and your ability to create plot and action is unmatched. This is an absolutely AMAZING piece of work and I'm ashamed that it has received so little attention.

Your dedication is admirable. Well-done.

I have checked back at least once a month to see if you have continued this story. I love it!. I'm not good at given crtiques, but I would like to read your script. The link will not let me see it. Can you e-mail it to me at

Thanks in advance